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	░▒▓❀Stop! Wait! You can not escape! ❀▓▒░ There's nothing here. Life is but a play, and all the people in it, actors.

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I wrote a really sucky poem-thing a few minutes ago. Took actually around 30 mintues to write. I was listenning to this song that swayed my mood, so i'm sure that has something to do with why it is so hopeless. None of it rhymes, i'm fairly sure. So, brace yourself. -warning- It's pretty ******' emo, i'll give it that. -warning- I have found my home Inside of loneliness Outside of life... My arms have grown cold Embracing softly myself There is no fear of losing more... My heart beats no more Resting in dark's sweet sleep Soft, hollow, cracked, charred... My eyes lay still No longer searching for escape Bitter tears sing out, they see only remains of me... In this hole, I make my home Deep within the pain of knowing The hardness of this beaten earth is all that comforts me... edaaz** · Thu Dec 01, 2005 @ 12:24pm · 2 Comments


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	When you're down, you're down. There's no shame in expressing how you feel. Expressing it through a poem is a good way of doing it, too. You're not whining or anything. You're writing a poem. And through poetry, music, or a painting, pain becomes more than brutal reality. It becomes sort of beautiful. I like this because it's honest. I don't really understand what some of the verses mean, though, you'd have to explain it to me. Offline Sneeuw · Community Member · Tue Dec 06, 2005 @ 11:53am


	That's some very powerful imagery. And, the other girl was right. It's not "emo". No more than I think of Hamlet's soliloquy as being emo, anyways. It's been a while since a song has hit me like that, but I think I can relate. By the way. Come back. Offline [-Iago-] · Community Member · Wed Dec 07, 2005 @ 04:58am

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