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Poetry- The Life of Death
Not what I would call very happy, but life is not always as planned.
Blind Emotions
My blind emotions
To some degree
Cannot find what
In you I see

You are a pro
Where I'm a con
What don't you know
My life you've drawn

What do I feel
What have I left
Lost your appeal
Your love now theft

Be there a way
Make you come back
Your thoughts to sway
Those skills I lack

The bell tolls long
The bell tolls wide
Death's siren song
Comes 'way from hide

I've lost my chance
To some degree
My blind emotions
Are killing me


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User Comments: [9]
Punk_B-tch_Heavy_Metal
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Thu May 28, 2009 @ 12:44am


Wow thats amazing!!! I really love it ^_^


xXDeaths ReaperXx
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Thu May 28, 2009 @ 03:40am


Thanks tons!
My definite favorite, of all my writing smile


shuugamoti
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Sun May 31, 2009 @ 08:16am


first bar is sorta sterile


Punk_B-tch_Heavy_Metal
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Sun May 31, 2009 @ 07:39pm


^_^ Your welcoem


XxAmazingKelseyxX
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Wed Jun 03, 2009 @ 06:26am


wow your are really good smile


i_hug_wafflez
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Wed Jun 03, 2009 @ 09:50pm


i'm speechlesssssssssss


xXDeaths ReaperXx
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Wed Jun 03, 2009 @ 09:55pm


biggrin
actual comments... I can't believe it!


-RiN- YiN-YaNg-
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Mon Jun 08, 2009 @ 12:25am


awwwww ...yew are awesome!!! i cant wait too read the next ones!!


Yuffie2487
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Sun Aug 30, 2009 @ 04:13pm


all your poems are very... uhm... exellent!! *air guitar* lol thats from one of my favorite movies bill and ted's exellent adventure...


User Comments: [9]
 
 
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