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Ashes, Ashes
Ring around the rosie
a pocket full of posies
ashes, ashes, we all fall down-

she makes her bed at night
She goes to turn the light
And in a deathless fright
Rings bound within her sight

She runs toward the window
On the wind does he float
The reapers hands are beginning to shake.
See him screaming through the crimson's reign.

(chorus)
The hearts devotion ended at the loom
The minds clearvoiance, his hands ensued
See them crumble, her pearly statues
The passion's line and terror's are beginning to blend, again

Ring around the rosie
A pocket full of posies
ashes, ashes, we all fall down

Can this dancing do us in?
From this paleness which is devil-sent?
Throw the ashes, cut the poppies, end your sin
We all fall down, and this does seem to be the end.

ring around the rosie
a pocket full of posies
ashes, ashes, we all fall down.

He pulls the curtains in his mothers room
Her fatal end started with the groom
It'll finally be his turn soon
He signed his one last pay check on his final noon

Shut your panes, muffle his crying pain
His house is just a few blocks down the lane
Don't you ever try to set him straight
It will be you the next time that you speak his name

(chorus)
The hearts devotion ended at the loom
The minds clearvoiance, his hands ensued
See them crumble, her pearly statues
The passion's line and terror's are beginning to blend, again

Ring around the rosie
A pocket full of posies
ashes, ashes, we all fall down

Can this dancing do us in?
From this paleness which is devil-sent?
Throw the ashes, cut the poppies, end your sin
We all fall down, and this does seem to be the end.

ring around the rosie
a pocket full of posies
ashes, ashes, we all fall down.

Ring around the rosie
a pocket full of posies
ashes, ashes, we all fall down

Ashes, ashes, we all fall down

Ashes, ashes, we won't fall down.

Ashes to ashes, we'll never fall-






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michibane
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 28, 2009 @ 11:38pm
Awesome song Fei,
But I think the crimson's reign would fit better than crimson's rain at the beginning
But it's just my opinion


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 29, 2009 @ 02:19am
Omg, Mel this is awesome! You have an amazing grasp of the English language. This really could've been written by some dead poet from England or something! lol. Great job! If you have more, you should definitely post them or even get an account on Fictionpress. Great work!



Amanda J Fair
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Lunar Jax
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 30, 2009 @ 12:24am
CHYU!!! this iz so cool!!! 8D
good job


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