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10-10sph's poems
its a few of the poems that i have written.
The sweetest of dreams come to me at night
a mothers good night kiss to tuck me in
a fathers hug and wish of good dreams
as i sail on the tides of my dreams

The sweetest of dreams come to me at night
softly my head rest upon my pillow
wrapped safely in my blanket I sleep
holding the softest bear in the world
drifting through the tides of my dreams

The sweetest of dreams come to me at night
the oceans soft caress touches my mind
foot prints placed in the sand by the sea
dolphins jumping in the beautiful waves
the moon reflecting brightly off the tide


10-10sph
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  • User Comments: [1]
    I like this one, and sorry to be a critique, but on the second line it would sound better for the last word to be "tight" , as so "a mothers good night kiss to tuck me in tight". regardless its awesome your talented.

    comment Apollo4783 · Community Member · Fri May 01, 2009 @ 02:35am
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