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I look at the bones before me on the ground. They smell of fresh blood, rotting flesh still upon them. I fall to my knees crying and begging myself not to lose this war. I stop crying. I rise to my feet slowly, hoping my knees dont tremble. I scream to the heavens above, hoping they will hear me. I scream "I am the chosen one!! For as long as I live I fight for honor!" I screamed again till my lungs were horse. I walk ahead, my armor stained with blood knowing the heavens will grant me power to defeat the army. I draw my blade and run forward towards the onslaught. Hoping my armor will hold again the enemy's sharpened blades. I then run faster without warning. I pray inside my head. 'I will avenge you father!' This is part of a book im writing Please tell me what you think ^^. I do dream avitars for 2k each :3 Just message me when you want one done!

Posted by: Allen-Wolf-Demon Thu Feb 12, 2009 @ 02:05am

I do dream avitars for 2k each :3 Just message me when you want one done!

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BeelzeBunny
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Thu Feb 12, 2009 @ 02:28am

I came, I saw, I loled...SORRY!

It was the, "I am the chosen one!!" part.

....>>...Whenever I hear that I lol and think of highlander...THERE CAN ONLY BE ONE!...-chop chop- XD

But eh, I say go forth and unleashed the bound creativity in your heart and soul...<< and mind b/c seriously I don't get why ppl leave out the word 'mind.' ....you think the heart and soul can come up with witty quips? I THINK NOT!

Also I can't really say much because I have no clue what is going on. I mean so far I'm getting: Chosen one who lost his father to the forces of some type of villianery and now is getting revenge and doing his chosen thing but at the moment is facing a strong army who he will more than likely win due to his strong will and courage. Oo

Nothing of me is Original.
I am the combined effort of everybody I've ever known.
-- Chuck Palahniuk, Invisable Monsters

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