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uuuuummmmmmm...I don't know...
A poem thing.......(It's not finished!)+
I had to write a poem for school,so here it is.....It's not all that great but at least it's heart felt. sweatdrop

When life's not worth liveing.
Then what's left for me?
When your all out of giveing.
And you drowned in your own sea.

When your crying so much.
That you run out of tears.
Evil nightmares and such.
That make up your fears.

Hot streams of fire.
It cuts like a knife.
It burns with desire.
You wish away your life.

When your heart becomes dark,
Like the deepest midnight.
You hunt like a shark.
For what's never in sight.

The hope in you hides,
Like a bat in the night.
You can never confide,
So you give up the fight.

They all call you names
And you say you don't care.
But it leaves you in shame
With your smile left bare.

You sit in your room.
Alone and distrot.
You soak in your gloom
All fights have been Fought.

((I probebly spelt a lot of things wrong please don't laugh at me....))

The shadow fox.


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  • User Comments: [2]
    wow thats pretty good

    comment Sorlin · Community Member · Thu Oct 13, 2005 @ 04:32am
    thats pretty good. in some ways i can relate to that poem *edits* wait i already commented on this sweatdrop ...sorry

    comment Sorlin · Community Member · Wed Nov 09, 2005 @ 01:55am
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