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This is something i wrote a long time ago aswell. I think it was back in 05-06 when i wrote this story. On my original Gaia account. [R]eno

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Soul Takers curse
On the outskirts of a town in the east, theres a man whos slain great beasts, though his money isnt much, he stays at cheap inn's and stays with sweet girls for jsut a night, .

The earlie morning he leaves out, to the next town, its just starting to get light.

Theres a boy that crosses his path to the just to the right, "what are you doing?" the name asked the boy "i'm going to follow you" the young boy replied, "why me?" the man asked as the boy dissapeared into the darkness

The wind whispers to the man, "this sin is yours" his troubled mind wondered, he knew that everytime he went back maybe a few days later that no one would be, the streets are abandond and corpses layed dead.

He wondered what that meant, who whispered to him, the boy that crossed his path, why was this happining? whated he do?

He went to the next town and went to the bar, he noticed the men and women in the bar, there life being slowly sucked out of them, there bright happy faces, full of color was now turning pale, they looked rather sick.

Around there eyes would start to turn dark, they took on an ill look.

"what is going on!?" the man shouted as they slowley withered infrount of him, "whats happining!?" he demanded to whatever it was that was takeing there energie away.

a whisper aired into his ear "its you, its your sin...your sin kills the ones around you"

The man leped back as the invironment started to twirl into the nothingness of a black whole sucking the souls of the bodys around him into it.

The darkness in the mans heart, the hatefullness he had twords others, all the men that he had killed in the past, adn the beasts that layed for nothing but the roaches adn the rats to eat, the man did nothing but destroy life around him, though he did not know it, his sins came to haunt him and slowly it would kill him aswell.

The man watched all the people around him die, the lives now all sucked from them all, he saw a mother and her child lay dead on the ground outside the inn, a boy and his dog sitting on a step, though it looked like the boy was asleep, but he was infact dead aswell.

the man could not leave the town, the smell of corpses soon filled the air, everything around him, the silence of the dead haunted him, the smell of the dead, it hurt his lungs, his nose couldent smell nothing but the dead.

Arms starts to come up from out of the ground grabbing his legs, deep and low voices, whimpery, crying sad voices call out to him "why? why did you kill us? what did we do?" the man crys out for them to leave him alone, but they pull him deeper and deeper into the black hole that he had created in his own heart, he didnt forgive himself for killing some one he once loved... some one dear to him is now gone and dead because of one fatil accedent years and years ago, it has slowly chewed at him, wanting revenge.

He hated no one but himself, he slowly killd no one but the one who had killed his loved one, he was hatefull to every one to keep them away frm such a harshfull being... he pushed them all away.

Now he lays in a bed in a type of coma, his thoughts are his death. the doctor that takes care of him is the one that he thought he had killed.

In his mind, the boy passed over his path again and became his toy. he messed with the boys emotions, toyed with him, adn then he left him to die aswell... this in the man made him sick, made him inhuman... made him a monster, the very monster that he hated... soon he would die the most sadest of deathes... because he had no friends, and no one would ever show him what love meant.

Slowly his soul turned insideout, and evil, killing what was left of anything sweet and pure.