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Random stuff I might think of and add here.
I might be posting here stuff like art umm important dates and well random stuff what else can I say XD?
My Bigest Atempt For Love

Poem comign from my heart:

I saw you, you saw me , at first there was not alot to see, but time played its faithfull hands, and brought us together so we held hands, neither the light of the start nor the shine of the moon could ever dictate how much I love you, Ive given my heart my heart had been true, and now I cant stand, the thought of being without you, to hold in my arms, to embrace in my soul, I want to be yours, like never before, ive cryed this night past, and sadly I say, I might be taking my leave, I will sleep full of wishes, that a choice you will make, to make my heart thrive, and put a stop to the pain.

(theres alot of typo's but I wrote this from my heart and I wish to keep it original without fixing it)


-Alain G. Aponte Egele-
(and yes thats my real and full name)


Darky Alan
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  • [10/21/08 06:48am]


  • User Comments: [6]
    Comment tell me what you think!

    comment Darky Alan · Community Member · Tue Oct 21, 2008 @ 11:32pm
    Darky, I'm generally not faint hearted when it comes to poetry
    but this made me cry no joke
    sad (
    I love it
    you should think about trying to publish this

    comment bonjoviluver93 · Community Member · Mon Oct 27, 2008 @ 03:18am
    i think your sweet and caring....your always there 4 me. its a rlly great poem you should make some more.... biggrin

    Life is but a dream.... but when dream becomes reality.... reality becomes a dream.

    'is it even worth living anymore? There are more fish in the sea. Aren't there? Well i'm glad i don't live in the sea' lol
    comment dolphinlover94 · Community Member · Sun Dec 07, 2008 @ 09:28pm
    crying thats such a beautiful poem honey,love it,really makes me cry.

    your a real poetist honey

    pss.LOVE YOU heart blaugh

    comment Miss Levana · Community Member · Sun Mar 01, 2009 @ 01:57am
    I'm happy you posted this poem Alan.. it shows a lot about you, and its a really sweet poem. smile

    comment Tanimochie Yagoto · Community Member · Sat May 30, 2009 @ 10:23am
    Daammmnn that's deep.
    -Random person-

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    comment iTrickYou · Community Member · Mon Jun 29, 2009 @ 02:24am
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