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My Journal.
I write stuff here. And you can't. Unless you comment it.
My crap of a love poem. O:
Every now and then,
I wait for you to pass by my classroom door,
Though just a glance is enough,
But I can't help but crave a little more.

It's dizzying how you smile,
How you could be so nice to me,
Maybe it's just a crazy phase,
But for now, I'd like to wait and see.

My dear heart just beats,
Slowly and rapidly at the same time,
But all the same, at an odd pace,
Again, again and again.

I'm drowning so deep,
And how much I like you isn't goin to save me,
Where the answer creeps,
It's likely I'm dead by then.

But maybe if I give it time,
And patiently wait untill you realize,
It's time to say something,
So I can move on or either just keep dreaming.



Future For Hire
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  • User Comments: [4]
    *gives a high five*
    a very good poem. touching and hopeful but not too mushy!
    yay!


    comment free_indeed · Community Member · Fri Oct 10, 2008 @ 12:06am
    very nice i really like it

    comment styledcliff · Community Member · Sat Oct 11, 2008 @ 07:19am
    Good poem! You have a lot of potential my young Padawan. I sound like a nerd don't I?

    comment Doc Purple · Community Member · Fri Feb 06, 2009 @ 02:06am
    No you don't, but...what's a Padawan?

    comment Future For Hire · Community Member · Fri Feb 06, 2009 @ 10:29am
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