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As the Day begins......
Easy Death
Anger, hatred, dead feeling,
flat eyes , thin mouth, hands clenched.
Teeth on edge, bleeding tongue, tight face,
flinging words, killer glares, fire flying.
Fists in air, tearing skin, ripping sounds,
screaming cries, blood splatters, glasses askew.
Shattered objects, glass breaks, silence,
lying on the floor, out of breath, feeling numb,
In shock, tons of blood, horrid pain,
alone, scared, darkness hits.


please tell me what you think ^.^ thanks






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iZahlzeit
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 11, 2008 @ 02:18am
Omg there was so much description and emotion that I could really relate to what you were saying

That was really good! biggrin


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