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peom anyone? kay this is my favorite poem i wrote... hope you enjoy... you can make suggestions but i won't take um blaugh Never cry: Standing on the front porch I see the sun rise I wipe shedded tears from my eyes Today is another day to try I promised myself I wouldn't cry Our love is deep and true I'm so lonely without you As you may have already guessed I don't think I can pass this test Deep aching sorrow fills me I long for what could be Between yourself and I I believe there is more than meets the eye And it is for you I strive to never cry by: Me

Posted by: OokamiUnari Mon Aug 04, 2008 @ 07:32pm

PM if you live in the midwest ^,^

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Tsutanai Kuro Neko
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Commented on: Tue Aug 05, 2008 @ 05:22pm


	Wow... It's really good... It's not like most poems, where you can't even understand it. Sad, though... Reminds me of a part of my story....

Commented on: Tue Aug 05, 2008 @ 05:24pm


	yeah i wasn't feeling sad when i wrote it though... ain't that strange?

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Tsutanai Kuro Neko
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Commented on: Tue Aug 05, 2008 @ 05:28pm


	Kinda... But, I don't really write anything too well XD I always fail at poems... I have a good song so far, though...

Commented on: Tue Aug 05, 2008 @ 05:30pm


	i get really good poems when i focus... and that's hard for me to do on command

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Tsutanai Kuro Neko
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Commented on: Tue Aug 05, 2008 @ 05:34pm


	XD lol... Well, I always worry about rhyming, and that throws me off..

Commented on: Tue Aug 05, 2008 @ 05:37pm


	i write the line and then change the end to ryhme and you know poems don't have to ryhme right?

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Tsutanai Kuro Neko
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Commented on: Tue Aug 05, 2008 @ 05:38pm


	Yeah... but it sounds better if they do ^-^

Commented on: Tue Aug 05, 2008 @ 05:40pm


	yeah but sometimes they sound fine they way they are..... but it's really the writers personal preferance that makes the poem

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Commented on: Tue Aug 05, 2008 @ 05:44pm

Commented on: Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 08:04pm


	it's really good i wish i could wright a good poem again sad oh well yours is sad but meaningful crying

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