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Bomb

The candle lit by herside
She looks in the mirror
At her blood shot eyes
morning peeping through the blinds
trying to see what has happened
though there is no sign
just the tears trickling down her cheek
the sun isnt the only one that cant see
where the pain is coming from
look on the inside
there is complete mayhem
all the regrets
hatred
threats
sadness
with all these things
cuts down the fuse
just waiting to blow up
to let out everything
so now she's just a ticking time bomb
tick.
tick.
tick.....
now she goes on with her days
like everday.
her fake smiles
her fake laughs
while she's in pain
while everyone cares bout themselves
not even stopping to see
how her day has been
not even a simple hello.
just cutting another piece of the fuse.
tick
tick.
tick...
today.
there was a suicide.
that supposedly happy girl
took her own life.
her own life to make everyone
else happy.
what did she get in return
just a light to her fuse.


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  • User Comments: [2]
    Wow.. this is really good. faaaar better than the two i wrote.

    comment Brent055 · Community Member · Tue Jul 29, 2008 @ 05:56am
    its good equally great to my sadness is when u open ur eyes to this poem ^^ u make me proud ... just dont umm die. XD

    comment xXMiss AsphyxiationXx · Community Member · Wed Jul 30, 2008 @ 06:21am
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