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this is now my poem book... if you get depressed easily dont read this... on the good side, if i have a good day i might put a happier poem... there i said it...
Because...

I cry myself to sleep because it's the only thing I can do right,
I avoid you because I would rather be alone,

I dress in black so I can be invisible at night,
I stay out late to avoid the fights that go on at home,

I remain misunderstood because no one wants to understand me,
I play my music loud so no one can hear me cry,

I rebel because no one will let things be,
I make a scene so you will notice if I die,

I cut my wrists so I know I'm not numb,
I sleep in late because I'm afraid of the day,

I don't try because everyone just assumes I'm dumb,
I don't talk because I have nothing to say,

I guess I don't need to be understood, I’ll be alright,
I just need you to leave me alone!

Or I might just crumble out here in the dark
engulfed in my own darkness. †






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Qixie
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 08, 2008 @ 04:50pm
-Cocks head to side-
I thought we've gone over this...But that doesn't include the most of the poem.

Lines I don't like: "I don't try because everyone just assumes I'm dumb,
I don't talk because I have nothing to say"
Reasons: That isn't you. You do try, to show that you are not dumb, I have seen you. German class you worked so hard, and then gave up. If you would have kept working on it, you would have kept making improvements. Also, you have a lot to say. Trust me, I know.

Other then those lines, its wonderful poem. And I officially hate you, I can't rhyme for my life.


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