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this is now my poem book... if you get depressed easily dont read this... on the good side, if i have a good day i might put a happier poem... there i said it...

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Because... I cry myself to sleep because it's the only thing I can do right, I avoid you because I would rather be alone, I dress in black so I can be invisible at night, I stay out late to avoid the fights that go on at home, I remain misunderstood because no one wants to understand me, I play my music loud so no one can hear me cry, I rebel because no one will let things be, I make a scene so you will notice if I die, I cut my wrists so I know I'm not numb, I sleep in late because I'm afraid of the day, I don't try because everyone just assumes I'm dumb, I don't talk because I have nothing to say, I guess I don't need to be understood, I’ll be alright, I just need you to leave me alone! Or I might just crumble out here in the dark engulfed in my own darkness. †

Posted by: -Never-Will-I-Choose- Tue Jul 08, 2008 @ 04:05pm

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Commented on: Tue Jul 08, 2008 @ 04:50pm


	-Cocks head to side- I thought we've gone over this...But that doesn't include the most of the poem. Lines I don't like: "I don't try because everyone just assumes I'm dumb, I don't talk because I have nothing to say" Reasons: That isn't you. You do try, to show that you are not dumb, I have seen you. German class you worked so hard, and then gave up. If you would have kept working on it, you would have kept making improvements. Also, you have a lot to say. Trust me, I know. Other then those lines, its wonderful poem. And I officially hate you, I can't rhyme for my life.

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