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this is now my poem book... if you get depressed easily dont read this... on the good side, if i have a good day i might put a happier poem... there i said it...
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-Never-Will-I-Choose-
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I thought we've gone over this...But that doesn't include the most of the poem.
Lines I don't like: "I don't try because everyone just assumes I'm dumb,
I don't talk because I have nothing to say"
Reasons: That isn't you. You do try, to show that you are not dumb, I have seen you. German class you worked so hard, and then gave up. If you would have kept working on it, you would have kept making improvements. Also, you have a lot to say. Trust me, I know.
Other then those lines, its wonderful poem. And I officially hate you, I can't rhyme for my life.