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Sams Insane Daily Drain
Writes down the days events in the most interesting way possible... Also may start writing the most random of all things (that includes so weird and wonderful stories, quotes and poetry), I might also have a b***h about things so be warned
ok so I can honestly say that unlike my last one this is really stalkerish sweatdrop I promise that im not really a stalker but yet again but I seem to be developing quite a talent for things like it so why not let you all be the judge

Feeling the sting of reality
Pressing against my shattered thoughts
Dreaming of a world with freedom
But knowing that that world will never exist
Look through that looking glass
Just like you flick to the past
Give me you heart
Give me you mind
Let me know you’ll be home on time

Lying low
Lying in love
How the times have changed
It all seems just so perfect on paper
Would it even matter if we made up?
Don’t you see the major need?
We’ll all just pack it up to self esteem
Is it really too late for things to go back?
Is it really past the point of no return?
Have we really stepped off the beaten track?

I think that I need you back
I think I need you by my side
You say that it’s nice that I feel this way
But there is no change
So tell me that you don’t feel the same way about me
If you did it would stop my pain
My sorrow
And the mental drain
If you just told me that you didn’t care
It would just leave me standing there…


and no this also isn't about anyone in particular and I'm not depressed!


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  • User Comments: [4]
    It actually doesn't sound too stalkerish. It's more like the poem person is asking for resolution to an ended relationship. Like, "if it's really over you gotta say so." Kind of thing.

    comment Miss Cerise Baie · Community Member · Wed Jun 18, 2008 @ 09:49am
    It's not really stalkerish

    Depressed or not this poem still makes it sound like you need a hug

    It's really good, though.

    mrgreen

    comment Cherrii Dollface · Community Member · Wed Jun 18, 2008 @ 05:09pm
    i agree, u need a hug!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! redface

    comment Xxx_ReddDeath333_xxX · Community Member · Thu Jul 10, 2008 @ 05:20am
    i dont think it stalkerish. it really made me want to go to u(sorry if that sounded weird) redface sweatdrop i love ur poems! they really cut into my heart. i cant stop reading them! there so good!

    comment UndeadBlossom · Community Member · Sun Jul 13, 2008 @ 02:16am
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