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Chains As I lay the rose I start to weep, fall down and climb to my feet with out your love my bonds I can not break. Waiting …. waiting to hear your words of sweet embrace. As I hear you my heart stops pounding as you draw near my head starts soaring as you wrap your arms around me my legs start to shake as your breath draws in my ear I start to melt away. Your voice sounds like birds chirping in the sweetest tones. Then with three little words my heart starts to beat as I turn around and fall to my knees and say, “I love you too.”

Posted by: steven1950 Mon Jun 09, 2008 @ 03:19am

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Zombieslikecake
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Commented on: Thu Jun 12, 2008 @ 02:55am


	Simply beautyful. You write amazing poetry. I also write poetry, but its not as good. =D I was hacked; But I got my Account Back. Lost about 50k in random items, Donators will recive art. NOTE: The hackers that had my account stole gold, Items and even tainted my posts and messages!!

Commented on: Fri Jun 13, 2008 @ 01:24am


	blushesthanks and im sure you have some very good ones

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Zombieslikecake
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Commented on: Fri Jun 13, 2008 @ 08:58pm


	welcome. =D

Commented on: Sat Jun 14, 2008 @ 03:48am


	lol

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Lady Nachtmare
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Commented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 05:09pm


	Well done! Draws the reader right in.

Commented on: Fri Jul 25, 2008 @ 05:39pm


	Makes me a bit sad. But it's very good :3 I like all the detail.

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Sexy_Preppy_Angel123
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Commented on: Sat Aug 30, 2008 @ 01:52am


	this one is really nice i wanted to cry when i read it heart hugs

Commented on: Tue Aug 18, 2009 @ 01:25am


	I love this poem...youre a very good poet I like ur work. You should read some of mine My Dream Avi-Donations Welcome Total Value: 517,208 Gold I need: Carol of Ol' Nick 3rd and 5th gen Picolitrosso's Urn 10th gen Currant Wine Canterbury Hat Rose and Milk Quartz Necklace G-LOL Pink Slippers G-LOL Pink Gown Neo Gloves Rose and Milk Quartz Earrings Dark Elf Potion (purple)

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