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The Ultamite T...and a pice of his mind Just junk about me and my feelings at that moment of time and space. nothing major. unless i say it is but thats not likely to happen anytime soon


T-Man V3
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Poetry from the heart....i guess.......
quick explination: last night, before i went to bed, or rather while i was in bed about to fall asleep, i was listining to the last song of the day (a special event i do sometimes were i just have music playing and lay in my bed. usualy its just one song that realy inspirs me or touches my heart in a special way....anyways back to the story) that song was Simply Beautiful by Al Green, who i currently have a huge intrest in. mainly because i can truely relate to most of his songs. plus to me they're real soulful and deep. to me they are. if you never really listen to any of his songs well....sorry. i'll post sme up eventualy. anyways, that song alone got me inspered. so much so, that i started to create my own lyrics for it. those lyrics turned into a love poem. and before i forgot every word i had created inmy head to say to the one i lovved. i decieded to get my lazy half sleepy butt up and write some of this down before it all faded away. so, without further adieu, here are the results. now, keep in mind, it was late at night. like around one or two in the morning. so if you think its lame, sucks, or is just stupid. sorry for wasting your time buddy. but if you like it, you love it, you want some more of it......cool. cool anyways, here it is. enjoy! 4laugh

Untitled (Lilac Butterfly)

To me, you’re more delicate than a flower. Yet you refuse to let the world crush your spirit. Every moment spent with you, I learn something new, about myself, the world, but most importantly about you. Somehow you’ve manage to unlock something special inside of me. Like our own secret garden of pure serenity. It’s heavenly, the way you smile at me. A beauty like no other. I feel so undeserving. To be greeted daily by such a lover. I can tell, you’ve got your spunk from your mother. Your fierce determination from your father. Some times I wonder, why you even bother. To deal with a guy like me who lost his way in the deep blue sea of depression. Yet, from your expression, I can tell you really care. About me, your precious little teddy bear. I don’t know what the future has in store for us. But you can trust. That this little butterfly, will always be by your side. Until the end of time.

Another untitled (Miss Lovely)

As you sit there, I can’t help but reminisce. About the golden years of our past, before our first kiss. You see I was just a fool, helplessly looking for a significant other, then you came along and decided to become my lover. though first you called me brother, and I labeled you sis. I could tell you felt differently about me, and you made that clear when you gave me my first kiss. of course, since then we’ve shared many ups and downs, no relationships truly perfect. But you stuck with me through it all, which made it truly worth it. You trapped me under your spell, from your eyes I can tell, that you hold a deeper affection for me, no words can ever describe. The way you care for me sometimes leaves me as helpless as a child. My heart becomes paralyzed from your radiant smile. simply beautiful , divine, truly one of a kind. If only I could unlock the secrets which lay on your mind. You stay constantly on mines. Watching over me like the moon resting in the night sky. You’re the rainbow which comes after my rainy blues, telling me to keep my head up, everything will be ok soon. My love. heart

so.....thoughts? ideas? want to name them? you can if you want. just share what you think of them and i'l get back with you sooner or later. until then, thank you for letting me waste your time mrgreen bye byes.





User Comments: [5]
hshaver13
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Mon Jun 02, 2008 @ 02:31am


These are amazing. Beautiful works.


Eh Mozhae
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Fri Jun 13, 2008 @ 09:43pm


Ok sorri it took so long, but i finally read it, beautiful very just heart touching, and look u r not waisting my time, i like reading ur entrys and commenting is even better. sweatdrop blaugh


HeavenlyRaindrops
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 04:38am


your poetry truly and deeply touches and inspires me i cant write poetry or songs but i do kno what i like and i like your poetry and your profile and i also like your stories that you came up with


Perfectly Imperfect 90
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Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 06:43pm


These are really good. You are a very good poet. smile


Eh Mozhae
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Wed Jul 23, 2008 @ 07:44am


I read it again for my own reasons and my fav is Miss Lovely, ttly romantic, i like that


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