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Verbal Sketchery
A place KijiLinn uses to vent various creative and personal writing tidbits, much like a sketchbook only in typing.
Nina's Norgul
With thanks to Axioma for the idea in the first place. heart

"Ever heard of Pippi Longstocking?"

Doe-brown eyes blinked back, a clear negative as she chewed slowly.

"The fictional creation of a Swedish gentlelady, loved all over the world for her impishness, inhuman strength and gravity-defying pigtails. Her best friends were a monkey -- a chimpanzee, as I recall -- and a very wise horse. I think you'd like her."

"Never had much patience for kids' stuff," Nina sniffed haughtily and paused to offer her companion a bite of her sandwhich.

"No, thank you," he declined politely, "peanut butter gives me gas."

"Of course, I'm sorry."

"If you shun all 'kids' stuff, you're going to have a very short childhood, Nina," he said gravely. "And we've talked about what happens to adults with a short or non-existant childhood."

"I'm not a child, though!" protested Nina. "Physically, biologically, maybe but I'm smarter and more mature than people twice my age."

He snorted in amusement, "Which really isn't saying much, my dear. The average sixteen-year-old of the species seems to take a backward slip in the intelligence and maturity departments. A side-effect of puberty, no doubt."

"See my point?" Nina beamed, but her companion only shook his shaggy head. "I'm seroius, Marcus. Maybe I can avoid puberty and remain this 'grown up' forever. Then I don't have to be an adult with no childhood, either."

"Dear, dear Nina," the Norgul sighed gustily. "I'd much rather see you mature into a creative, delightfully healthy adult -- puberty and all -- than see you waste away as a child in an adult's body. Or worse, an adult in a child's body. Better to grow than to stagnate."

Nina chewed her lip and came to put her arms around the Norgul's great, shaggy, snaggle-toothed muzzle. "But I don't WANT to grow up, Marcus. I don't want to lose you."

"You'll never LOSE me, Nina," he murmured warmly. "I'll always be around when you need me. I promise."

EDIT: DV, you'll have to pardon Marcus. The fact that a Norgul has read Pippi Longstocking at all is impressive, considering his relatively intangible state. 3nodding heart


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  • User Comments: [5]
    First off: Pippi Longstocking!! heart T'was one of my favorite books ever. Read, read and re-read it religiously.

    Only...Pippi Longstocking was written by a guy? I'm pretty sure it was by Astrid Lindgren. Unless this is some crazy alternate universe. Wait, what am I talking about. Of course it's a crazy alternate universe.

    Also, while the dialogue itself is heart , the ccharacter descriptions are...well, not there. Now, I'm not saying you need to distrupt the flow of the conversation by sticking long-winded descriptions of Nina's irises or just what the precise color of her hair is, but a couple of hints are usually appreciated. Actually, with Nina, you did a pretty good job of sneaking them into the story, now that I think about it.
    Norgul: Hell, even now, I'm not entirely sure what he is, other than a Norgul. I mean, I pictured him as a horse, but someone else might not. I don't know if this was your intention, or not.

    But these are just minor points. All in all, I liked your story very, very much. One of the reasons is that the Pippi reference at the beginning is totally appropriate, because this story appears to be dealing with quite the same things the Pippi Longstocking stories did.

    Anyway, my pixelated thumbs are up, you just can't tell they are.

    comment Axioma · Community Member · Fri Aug 05, 2005 @ 08:49pm
    Only...Pippi Longstocking was written by a guy? I'm pretty sure it was by Astrid Lindgren.

    Also, Herr Nilsson wasn't a chimpanzee. ninja

    comment Deep Vermillion · Community Member · Fri Aug 05, 2005 @ 08:57pm
    xd Thanks for the pointers, guys. It's been AGES since I read Pippi Longstocking (also one of my favorite children's stories) and this was written off-the-cuff on my lunch at work last night. I didn't get a chance to check my facts. sweatdrop I shall correct. heart

    comment KijiLinn · Community Member · Fri Aug 05, 2005 @ 09:00pm
    This is why you must keep writing all the time.

    You want an 'out' to your fear-filled future? You're holding the key.

    comment Romuel · Community Member · Fri Aug 05, 2005 @ 09:49pm
    Key? More like a whole board of keys. biggrin

    comment Axioma · Community Member · Sat Aug 06, 2005 @ 12:10pm
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