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Love at first touch
This ones for all you ladies out there lol cool

Love at first touch
By: Jeff Gray (( [ J r . L i c i o u s ] ))

A gasp of breath caught in his throat
as her hand brushed against his arm.
Her enchanting musical laghter
proclaimed her feminine charm.

He trembled as she leaned to him
to whisper in his ear
thunder roared in his head
but he couldn't seem to hear.

The warmth of her promising smile
melted his heart so cold
her splendor dazzled his cynic's eyes
and caused his shriveled soul to unfold.

She stood as though waiting for him
and offered her hand for his own
he took her fingers lightly in his,
sighing now, a lover's moan.


[ J r . L i c i o u s ]
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  • User Comments: [27]
    its not my greatest poem ever sweatdrop

    comment [ J r . L i c i o u s ] · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 06:04pm
    very nice jr. she must be special.

    comment ladyguineveer32 · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 06:04pm
    I never wrote this to anyone..

    comment [ J r . L i c i o u s ] · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 06:06pm
    gonk gah thats not fair stare yours is better than mine.....

    comment JamieTiger · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 06:08pm
    This is one of my lower classes x_x;;

    comment [ J r . L i c i o u s ] · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 06:12pm
    Mmmn. Delish... [[ Crap. I need an emoticon of licking lips xp ]]

    Any more?


    comment roxicious · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 06:17pm
    Lol I do but only for tomorow it shall wait

    comment [ J r . L i c i o u s ] · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 06:23pm
    stare =_= than mine stink on ice...........

    comment JamieTiger · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 06:32pm
    Yay, another one! I can't wait! whee

    comment roxicious · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 07:27pm
    heart That is so beautiful. I love it. ^-^ heart

    comment urd-norn-of-the-past · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 08:18pm
    Missing the poetic rythem in some areas... blaugh But still touching and as lovely as ever

    And holy s**t you got alooooot of "Ladies" Out there that this pleases... You got some Pickin to do kiddo xd

    Wheres that guy that hit on you... i wan't see his reaction that the poem isn't for him ^_^


    comment playwithfire · Community Member · Wed Aug 03, 2005 @ 11:58pm
    Thats awsome and I dont care if you say if its lower class, Its wonderful.

    comment Tigris-solemn · Community Member · Thu Aug 04, 2005 @ 06:27am
    Fire it doesn't have to be in "rythem" related gonk

    comment [ J r . L i c i o u s ] · Community Member · Mon Aug 08, 2005 @ 03:21am
    Jr.!! You said there was gonna be another one, and there isn't. gonk

    comment roxicious · Community Member · Mon Aug 08, 2005 @ 05:24pm
    Hold on ticious, I have them wrote out on paper so that means I have to type them out. But im to lazy!

    comment [ J r . L i c i o u s ] · Community Member · Mon Aug 08, 2005 @ 06:26pm
    Aww. Okay. You write them out EVENTUALLY right?

    comment roxicious · Community Member · Mon Aug 08, 2005 @ 06:32pm
    Yes I will. No worries whee

    comment [ J r . L i c i o u s ] · Community Member · Mon Aug 08, 2005 @ 06:38pm
    >.< Just some parts are rhyming and some are not... *gnaws on it*

    comment playwithfire · Community Member · Mon Aug 08, 2005 @ 10:33pm
    *falls in love with it* heart

    comment earthy001 · Community Member · Tue Aug 09, 2005 @ 06:01am
    20th Comment!! xd Aha... sorry. I just HAD to even it out. sweatdrop

    comment roxicious · Community Member · Tue Aug 09, 2005 @ 08:57pm
    ninja

    Mwahah.. BLACKJACK! 21!


    comment playwithfire · Community Member · Thu Aug 11, 2005 @ 01:02am
    NAWW! gonk
    [literally drops new headphones on keyboard]
    'OLY CRAP! Cheap arse headphones... they were only 1 dollar in the airplane.

    OOH! 22! xd BOOYAARR!!11!1elben!!
    [crap. gotta stop listening to Billy Talent, too crazy for my own good sweatdrop ]

    comment roxicious · Community Member · Thu Aug 11, 2005 @ 08:01pm
    Glomps! heart

    comment Tigris-solemn · Community Member · Thu Aug 25, 2005 @ 07:55am
    Junior! Update time! C'mon, pretty please? New poem?

    [ Oh yeah, 24th ]

    comment roxicious · Community Member · Mon Aug 29, 2005 @ 09:01pm
    aw <B

    comment Mizz Bob · Community Member · Tue Aug 30, 2005 @ 08:57pm
    How romantic.... whee heart

    comment omiko · Community Member · Thu Sep 01, 2005 @ 10:51pm
    Hey Junior! Tis me 'ticious on my new account. articious is my mule now. sweatdrop
    Well. Aha.. yeahh. By the way.
    Make a new poem pretty please?!


    comment Arosenne · Community Member · Sun Sep 04, 2005 @ 02:11am
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