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A look in my mind
What do you see? Air? That's about it!
Happiness is something we borrow
This smile that I wear
it is not real
I pasted it over my frown to hide my sorrow
Happiness is not a gift
it is something we borrow

Sadness was given to us
a bad gift on god's part
one that I wish I could return
it pains the heart
draining sanity from the soul
that seems to be it's goal



This poem is one that I am actually somewhat pleased with the results.
I never am completely pleased with my work.


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  • User Comments: [2]
    So... no one likes my poem?
    Understood.
    I'm really bad.

    comment _lov3_m3_d3ad_ · Community Member · Sat Apr 12, 2008 @ 02:27am
    I really like this one! I think it's really good! Mine suck... -.-'

    comment Strudel Facen · Community Member · Wed Apr 16, 2008 @ 02:17am
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