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Life: each breath i take adds another chain
each heart beat puts another knife through me
and with every second i cry another bullet flies in at me
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a dream i hope to never live
its dark out. were walking through the glass (ma and Dylan) we walk in side this room and i softly kiss him. were surrounded in gold and blue colours. i mumble to him
"I'll be right back..."
then i walk out of the room i grab out a shiny revolver and walk back into the room
and hold it to me chest then sslowly pull the trigger as i walk towards him. he catches me in his arms and holds me close praying i wont die, i wont leave him. you hear the gun hit the floor and then i look up into his warm sweet eyes and in a whisper i say
"I love you .... and i always will ..." i then close my eyes forever more. through the sound of the music in the background you can hear the dropplets of my blood hitting the floor beneath, you can see and feel the sadness in him. and then you just hear the lyrics :"promise i will be forever yours .... promise not to say another word ..." and all you see is our faces in a fade. suddenly everything is black



i may be a good artist but no matter how hard i try i cant not create this scene on paper it never comes out right. please comment on this with what you think.


xXMiss AsphyxiationXx
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