this is my first poem I've made so sorry if it sucks
and don't ask how I thought of it. I just thought of something and went with it.
I'm So In Love With You.
You don't even know.
How much it hurts.
(Do you even know?)
Or are you blind?
Blinded by those who hurt you before.
Are you scared?
Scared of the one who would never hurt you?
Well just so you know.
I'm So In Love With You.
(And I will be forever.)
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I like to read other peoples poetry, so I did.
You need to have more confidence. ^_^ Believe in yourself and your ability. Then edit your poem. It's good as it is, yes, but it could be GREAT. I can't pick a favorite spot this time... but I love the use of questions. ^_^