Ok, so here is a randome poem that I made up in like 5min's, so yeah...I know it most likely sucks...but I just really liked it, please be crucial if you comment on it, I want to know how I did....ok...here it goes...... whee
My angel from god.
I’d put my life on the line for you,
Every little thing you do
The way you talk, smile and walk
It’s what keeps me going day and night
On those nights when I’m alone in the dark,
Sad and depressed
One memory of you and it’s suddenly regressed
You’re what keeps me going,
So I thank you
Your love is like breathing
It’s essential for me to live,
And when I don’t breathe your love, it hurts till I’m blue
Babe you’re what keeps me going
Just one thought of you,
One look,
One smile,
One thought,
One touch
Baby you’re what keeps me going, threw and threw
I heard once that if you are touched by an angel you grow wings,
Is that why you’re scared to touch?
I promise to you I won’t ever fly away,
You ask what I mean and this is what I say.
You are an angle of god,
He sent you to me,
To love and protect you,
That’s what I mean
I won’t ever go,
Even though you already know,
Why do you tremble in my arms?
Those pained eyes stair into mine and I can’t help but wonder
Who would ever harm an angel with such majestic wings?
Who would scare the heart of such a fragile being?
Who would want to break that of which can’t fight back?
The mere thought of losing you is what I fear most.
I need to see your smile,
I need to feel you close,
I need to hear your voice and every breath you take,
I want to love you and you love me.
Can such an angel as you grant me one wish?
My wish is for you to understand,
To see the you that I can
To listen to your heart and tell me what it feels,
To trust me and no one else.
Can you grant me a wish my angel from heaven?
Always be happy and please don’t cry,
I want you to smile,
I want you to fly.
Baby if you’re not flying then I might as well be dying,
Because if you feel pain I feel it twice as hard,
When you cry it rips my soul apart,
Do you love me or is this just a dream?
Are you the one?
The only one for me?
Can you trust me and I trust you?
Can you kiss me and me you?
Can I hold you in my arms and tell you it’s all right?
Can you look up at me with those big beautiful eyes?
Can you smile for me, a true smile of the heart,
Or can you push me away and leave me in the dark?
I love you,
I need you,
Please don’t go,
Without you beside me I don’t even know.
If you were to go,
I would cry,
If you were to cry,
I would die
I would pull out my heart and give it to you,
Any thing to make you see,
How I love you,
And you love me.
My angel from god,
I want you to know,
That some day in the distance
When we have passed and are apart,
We will find each other again.
Someday when we are in heaven,
I will look for the angel,
The one with the soft brown hair,
The one with the broken smile,
The one with the battered wings and dented halo.
I will find my angel again,
And I will love her for always,
I will care for and protect her
No matter how much she begs not to.
For she is my angel,
My angel of god,
I drip with sin,
But she does not
You are my angel,
My angel of god,
I will love you for always my love of them all
You are my angel the one that can fly,
You are the one I want by my side.
~Chi ♥
So what did you guy's think? I know it was lengthy...but I just really liked it...it was like three pages long when I wrote it on word so yeah...he he he.^^ Please leave a comment for this one, I really liked it, but I understand if you don't. 3nodding
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i'm hopeless at poetry. i can write poetry but it takes an imense amount of brain power and time to write one. i prefer to write stories. the words come out a lot easier for me.....
poetry requires a different way to visualize things.....
i guess the easiest type of poetry i can ever write is a haiku! thats only three lines and it still kills me to write a perfect one! 3nodding xd