Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

"Sorry I was Never There"
Newly-made poem.
I want comfort,
I want to feel good,
I wish I had a hand to hold,
Like a normal person should.

I want the hugs,
I want a kiss,
I wish I had the smile,
Beholding the current bliss.

I want a fellow heart,
I want the eyes to see,
I wish someone could mend,
The scattered parts of me.

I want to feel patched up,
I want to feel new,
I wish I wasn't broken,
I'll hope there's something you could do.

If only my heart wasn't shattered,
A million pieces to the floor,
I wouldn't cry to my sleep at night,
I wouldn't have tears anymore.






User Comments: [5] [add]
raishin
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Fri Jul 15, 2005 @ 10:01am
You're torn by things a lot, you remind me of myself somehow. o:


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 15, 2005 @ 10:01am
WOW!!
that totally blows away anything i could write.

i feel for you though.

i felt the same way (still feel the same way) when my first girlfriend left without saying anything.
*goes to wallow in self pity in the corner*




Purple Haze [BP]
Community Member
Blue_the_wolf
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Fri Jul 15, 2005 @ 10:43am
That is how I feel! scream


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 15, 2005 @ 10:46am
who is in your sig? kass?



ysevery1staren
Community Member
outsider_mentality
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Fri Jul 15, 2005 @ 07:00pm
awesome... i wish i could write like that


User Comments: [5] [add]
 
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum