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Most of what i write is in spanish, so please forgive me I'll do my best to translate it..... please forgive all my grammatical mistakes, I'm still learning english.. love u all and please DO NOT copy anything.
Tales from a Black Heart

TALES OF A BLACK HEART
Demon

I cut my my chest open and threw away my heart
So I wouldn't miss you, but I miss you even more
I thought this would make me numb,
but I feel even more than before
How did I let this happened?

Being a heartless woman I asked myself
Why do I feel this much? Why do I feel at all?
So I found an answer
My skin still feels your embrace
My lips still feel the warmth of your lips
Those innocent kisses I remember them well.

2
At night because this demon can see well
contemplatting the moon which lets her know
When her beloved might appear, but soon
her eyes are blinded by tears. Black tears
She's allowed herself to cry for the first time.

She's never cried for anyone before, she wonders
is this what's called love?
For the fisrt time a Demon feels like entering paradise

Going towards paradise, she was broken by angels
Broken and bleeding without a heart, she saw his face
And remebered that he showed her paradise,
He taught her that paradise can be found in the most
Darkest places

He made a new paradise for her
She felt like she had been undressed by him
He took guilt, fear, sorrow, all the bad things she saw in hersefl away
A Demon feeling?
He saw that her heart was the heart of a human.
Did he love her?
Were they lovers?

3

Why do I feel incomplete?
I tried to look for my heart, but I found nothing
I felt closer to you, then I knew you had it with you.
How I wish that not only my heart, but the rest of me
were with you.



TO BE CONTINUED.

By MPR





Lachiqui
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  • User Comments: [1]
    Lieutenant Nishin
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    Sat Feb 09, 2008 @ 01:46am


    That actually wasn't bad. I have nothing else to say.


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