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So, I'm working on my novel as you should know. Here's a section of it. PM me and tell me what u think.
"'Oh my god! Look at your hand Care!' Lin exclaimed.Another riddle had been burned into the paper, and into my hand. It said, 'you are almost there... ~S.L.' And the tunnel was around the corner."
Its a work in progress. Ill keep you updated on it. Its currently 7 chapters, 18 pgs in computer paper long. if published, most likely 7 chapters will equal 36 pgs.
Heres a summary of the story I'm trying to create.
"15 year old Carinna Reynold had a normal life, until her school's fall sophomore camping trip, where her best friend Laurel is kidnapped by the mysterious, but powerful, psychotic Seth Linkend. Carrie, her boyfriend Kevin, and new found friend Lin, led by the equally mysterious Sword Lord, seek to find Laurel, uncovering a whole new world with deadly secrets along the way. Packed with danger and adventure, "Happy Death's-Giving" is a cheerful new addition to the mystery and fantasy genre."
Once again, PM me if you want to here more. Im eager for some feedback. I havent realeased any of my story to anyone untill now.
yours truely, LIZ heart
 liz is amazing · Thu Jan 24, 2008 @ 03:24pm · 0 Comments |
