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Tatsu-Chi's Poetry Book - Please Comment
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One Of My Songs
heres one of the many song lyrics ive written

Self-Destruction


Verse 1
I take my faithful knife
Draw it swift across my veins
Strip away my skin right to the bone
Cut away the pain ive never shown


Chorus
See the blood flow (from wounds that will never heal)
how could you know (what i feel and why i do)
Now ive got to go
((this blade cant get any deeper))


Verse 2
Drops falling from my finger tips
Taste so sweet upon my lips
So much darkness in my life
Surely these scars cant be the light

Chorus

Bridge
On the path to Redemption
My mind a useless function
My life has reached its final junction
Is this my time My Self-Destruction


Verse 3
Now i was torn apart that day
When you said with him you felt that way
Sent me in to a spin out of control
How could you just stand and watch me fall

Chorus x2
Bridge

End
Will It Ever End
Won't You Just Let Me Die
Free Wheeling
Down Down Down
I'm Gone In A Blaze Without The Glory


Notes

() = Second Singer/Backing Vocals
(()) = Both Singing


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  • User Comments: [8]
    That is deep and wonderfully written. I can see it all playing inside my brain like a picture movie. (Some say I have an overactive imagination.) Well that's all I can think to say at the moment, I am to shocked by awesome writing ability. Thank you for sharing.
    (Don't check out my journal for some poor writing ability)
    -Still learning reverse phycoligy. ^^-

    comment Keirra Mazuki · Community Member · Sun Jul 10, 2005 @ 05:33am
    Happy Christmas to all and to all a good night!!!! xd

    comment LlamaKid · Community Member · Sun Jul 10, 2005 @ 06:47am
    ooh. It's very deep, but well written. It's kinda gloomy though. Sometimes it's not all that bad though. It's good.

    Hey, check out my journal sometime, I have some stuff in there.

    comment CrazyBeautiful9 · Community Member · Mon Jul 11, 2005 @ 03:49pm
    I really like it,darkness is very tempting,isn't it?

    comment FaithRose · Community Member · Wed Dec 28, 2005 @ 11:07pm
    heart Luff luff luff it ........ lots like jelly tots hehe! heart

    comment vomit_fairy · Community Member · Mon Jan 23, 2006 @ 01:02pm
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