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xgaugaux
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Chapter 1: Mystery...

"God, where the hell am I?" I mumbled to myself angrily and exhausted as I pushed the tall grasses aside moving myself to space where my foot could touch the solid surface. I looked around at the tall trees and the endless land filled of grass. I tired to study my surroundings a little more, but gave up after seeing no difference between the nearest acorn tree next to me and the tree furthest I could see from me. I took a deep breath and let out the frustration in me at that moment and continued to walk. I took my step slowly and calmly at this foreign place, but I soon on lost my patience. I quickened my pace and took random turns around the towering mossed-covered trees. I quickened my pace a little more and soon seemed to be jogging. As i jogged I felt my bare legs sweep along the long, dew-covered grass with a feeling of freshness, as if it was the only thing on my side at the moment.

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"What do you think your doing?" She looked and glared at my with hated and suspicion. She walked closer to me. Her glared pierced me deeper as she came closer. I took a step back.
"N..nothing..I..I was just... saw the door open...and i thought..." my voiced trailed down, my eyebrows wrinkled and i stared at the floor afraid to lookup.
"Thought what," she said with a icy tone, that sent chills up my spine. I felt her presence closer to me.
"Umm..." i said quietly, wondering in fear whether she had heard me or not.
"You know you shouldn't be her so," she started, voice seemingly gental and smooth, " get out now, before I changed my mind." She turned around and walked to her desk taking some papers and scaning them. I quickly turned around and ran out the door of this room and ran out the huge doors of the house. After, I had exit out of the house, I continued to run, not dropping my speed. I ran without thinking, where i was going, all I cared at that moment was like all the other times I left the house, was to get away from it.

I soon felt my self gasping for air, no longer able to run and took a corner and stopped as my body trembled from not only the long sprint, but also from the cold icy glare and piercing needles of her voice.

As soon as I had calmed down, I tried to walk back home, but it was harder the walking up a mountain. I didn't want to go back and hear her voice, or see her look at me with so much hate. It was painful. Every time she speaks, I wanted to punch her, but when I look at her glare, my motives of any kind turns into fear.

I walked aimlessly, not even trying to get home. My thought was filled with the punishment I may receive when I return. The very thought made my eyebrow wrinkle in worry and anger.
"I hate this messed up place, I wish I could be somewhere else and be happy!" I mumbled loudly glaring at the cement blocks ahead of me. Without noticing the slightly leveled cement surface, I continued to walk and felt my body trip. Without time to be surprised, my body hit the cold cement floor.

CHIRP CHIRP>
"Urg...my head...god it hurts," I groaned, rubbing my head as I sat up. I shook my head and squinted my eyes, trying to focus them. I drop my hand on to the floor, supporting my body. I tried to massage my head, only feeling a small bruise and out of pain, I grabbed the soft grass beneath my hands and ripped them out. Then I shook my head once again hoping to shake the pain out. Then my eyes widen with realization. First I looked at my hand. Grass...?. Then I looked around, tall tress, bushes of blueberries and other fruits that I had no idea what it may be, grass, logs, sparkling minerals in the soild floor. This was defiantly not the city where I lived.

"Where... am I?"





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mardocrules
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comment Commented on: Tue Jan 15, 2008 @ 11:20pm
I LUFF IT!!! ITS SOOO MYSTERIOUS!! lol i hope you write more! blaugh heart


comment Commented on: Wed Jan 16, 2008 @ 02:01am
ha ... interesting

I love the idea of face expresion as well as thoughts all at once and that how the main character's feelings are.

I agree it was very interesting because it made me stay focused on it and not do math hw lol

but I'm serious I like it I didnt know about your writing talent

I also want to read more!!! eek



vickysandoval93
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xgaugaux
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comment Commented on: Wed Jan 16, 2008 @ 02:29am
thanks >.< i lov u guys!


comment Commented on: Wed Jan 16, 2008 @ 03:11am
creepy and mysterious lol you did good but it got kinda weird



Stretchy Briefs
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Shrimp Dumplings
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comment Commented on: Thu Jan 17, 2008 @ 02:51am
It's wonderland!!~~!!~!~~!~!!~~!~!~~!~!~!!~~!!~!~ now reading chap. 2..


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