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expressions of MY soul
this is a poetry journal..some poems will be incomplete..enjoy
not yet named..give me suggestions plz
Chorus: You taught me how to move
like I move.
You taught me how to breathe
like I breathe.
You taught me how to walk
like I walk.
But now, with my eyes,
I can see.
All that you taught me
was a joke.
And all I learned from you
was to lie.
Now I have but one
wish for you.
I wish for you to lay
down and die.
Verse 1: Have I had much time to
waste on you?
I think I know the answer
as we speak.
All the time I've wasted
with you,
Was something that tasted
bittersweet.

will write more someday..came up with this while listening to music..its actually a song not a poem..i will write music someday and display it on youtube when i get a video camera and a moviemaking program on my p/c..'til then i bid thee farewell


Empress of Shadows
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  • [01/11/08 02:43am]


  • User Comments: [2]
    Sounds beautiful. But when I was singing it in my head, it sounded like crap. But hey, thats just me. I'm tone deaf! XDDDD


    Keep on writing!

    comment Chunky Love · Community Member · Fri Jan 11, 2008 @ 03:05pm
    actually its a beautiful song..it all depends if u sing it the right way

    comment Empress of Shadows · Community Member · Sun Jan 13, 2008 @ 04:18am
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