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Still Teishi Stories, poems, the usual lot, if anyone cares to look anymore.


Silver Nephilim
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I GOT PUBLISHED AGAIN! blaugh blaugh blaugh And here's the poem that was chosen as one of the only two from the whole school!!!

Look But Don't Touch

The door opens.
The room seems small to our party of five,
but holds the steel bed in the center.
It looks so small in the sparse, cold little room.
He looks asleep,
the blanket tucked up to his chin,
eyes closed, his face still that earth-child tan.
I want to say,
"Ha ha, good joke," or "C'mon, wake up so we can go home,"
but nothing is said.
Like an antique,
or something otherwordly,
the rule remains:
Look, see, cry, speak in whispers.
Do not touch.

Comments appreciated.





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Shaemir
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comment Commented on: Thu Jan 10, 2008 @ 10:17pm
*Tear drops*


comment Commented on: Fri Jan 11, 2008 @ 12:09am
*Tear attempts to drop, but is boiled away by mini-dragon*

Still not fair... I haven't been bloody published once...
...
*cough*

Congratulations, though!

What's the title of the book?

EDIT : PS : Ori -- Shut up.

EDIT x2: PPS: =D Thankee, Ori.



Xinith
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Orizion
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comment Commented on: Fri Jan 11, 2008 @ 01:53am
Congratulations! Excellent work! Phantastiche!


comment Commented on: Fri Jan 11, 2008 @ 02:00am
Good, good.
I got published once in a magazine, but yeah, mine isn't so cool.
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Sapience Among Vipers
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