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Kiyra's Venting Place
i probably wont vent here as much as write poems or storys but wat ev...
STORY TIME! characters & intro
this is the beginning or a story im writing. im still editing this part so dont laugh if its horrible.

Characters:
--Kaela. 14. she cuts. her rents are always fighting. grades dropping. has 3friends...Andy(bf), Brandi, & Ana
--Andy. 14. beer addict. his only sis ran away about 1year ago. no friends except Kaela(gf).

INTRO
"No. Please. Stop. I cant take anymore." She stared up into his piercing blue-silver eyes. "Please..." she begged him. One more hit and she was gone.

I dont know why this happened. I don't know how. They looked like the perfect, average couple. She was beautiful, smart, funny. Yet, she was still an outcast, having only three friends. But those friends were her life, her connection to the world, the real world. Without them, she'd be dead now.

Sadly, he was an even bigger outcast. She seemed to be his only true friend. On the occasions that he did something stupid and everyone stared in disgust, she was sometimes embarrassed. But then he'd look into her eyes and hug her tightly and all the embarrassment went away. They seemed to be the perfect couple.


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