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its my journal.
idk. anything i want to.
tell me what u think of the peom. HONESTLY

Wou're beauty measures beyond compare.
Where to start? i wonder where?

You're serenity is reflected in the sky.
for when i see you i want to fly.

you're beauty is reflected in the sea.
calm and cool, just you and me

you're love is reflected in you're eyes.
when i see you, my sorrow dies.

i know...its bad......and i dont think its finished yet.... sweatdrop


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  • User Comments: [9]
    Ohhhhhhhhhh its so beautiful whos it about??? Not to be rude or anything but yeah your such a great poem writer. heart heart

    I tear my heart open I sow myself shut my weakness is that I can`t do much and our scares remind me that the past is real I tear my heart open just to feel
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    The Gang
    comment SweetKeiks · Community Member · Tue Nov 06, 2007 @ 01:49am
    no, its really good.
    this poem is extremely touching heart
    whoever this poem is about with adore you forever when she reads it
    Bananas28, the girl in this poem will treasure you and your heart for a lifetime.
    I know I would... smile

    Take care of this girl and make sure she is always happy.
    Never let her down and give her something she will never forget.(a kiss, mabie)
    Let her know how you feel and you just might find out that she likes you back. heart heart heart

    comment mcrrockerchic103 · Community Member · Tue Nov 06, 2007 @ 07:37pm
    Hey don`t for git that the girl your talking about will always have this poem to be with her forever donl `t let her down so be happy together I know I would be with you so make sure you treat her right and she`ll be yours forever and not forget about that poem and on her, wores day ever she look back and read it and she will smile and think I have a good guy .And she willsay to her self how did I get so lucky to have guy like you.!!!!!. biggrin redface heart heart

    I tear my heart open I sow myself shut my weakness is that I can`t do much and our scares remind me that the past is real I tear my heart open just to feel
    By :
    The Gang
    comment SweetKeiks · Community Member · Wed Nov 07, 2007 @ 01:28am
    aaawwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so sweet! if a guy told me that i'd probibly start crying!!!!! *starts crying* dang its not even for me and i'm bawling!!!!!!!!!!! this is so good!!!! heart heart heart how can you say its bad????

    He that does lips or hands adore, deserves them only and no more.
    But I love all and every part, and nothing less can ease my heart!
    -Sir Charles Sedley
    comment Kechero · Community Member · Wed Nov 14, 2007 @ 07:10pm
    That's the poem you showed me after select choir practice....then I had trouble with closing my bag. lol. I love this poem, Chris. heart

    comment Beatellicle · Community Member · Tue Jan 01, 2008 @ 09:27pm
    Short poems are usually the best. I can stay awake while reading them, hee hee.

    comment Krusadin · Community Member · Wed Mar 12, 2008 @ 05:41pm
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw you're a sap

    comment MissFerSure · Community Member · Wed Apr 09, 2008 @ 02:15am
    its beautiful..

    comment Prescribed Minds · Community Member · Sat Jun 21, 2008 @ 06:43pm
    It's very lovely. Perhaps go with a little something different every other phrase, instead of using "Your". Have fun with it, mix it up a bit. You have great potential, and the courage to show the world. I admire that. 3nodding

    comment Lani De Mirshanns · Community Member · Wed Jul 16, 2008 @ 08:30am
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