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	tom_boy's Journal hey whats up tp my self i am so bored now no one is on to talk to at alll anymore i am so lonly i might just go and cry in a corner

	with every star
	with every star

· Sat Jun 11, 2005 @ 07:24am · 3 Comments


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	I like it. ^_^ You might want to use a new format though, try making a new line every sentence, it makes it easier to read. My only crique itself is this line here- 'and I am filled with happiness and not loneliness'. You might want to take out the 'and not loneliness', it seems to distrupt the flow. But that's just my opinion. ^_^ Offline · Community Member · Sun Jun 12, 2005 @ 07:43am


	WWWWWOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! crickets chirping o.o; Offline · Community Member · Fri Jun 24, 2005 @ 03:41am


	I loved it raven! but next time, do as that other person sid! Offline · Community Member · Wed Jul 13, 2005 @ 03:26am

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