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This is my happy self being my dumb person..
new poem
heres the continuation of my poem

(set 1)
Now that the rain has passed,
i never thought that i could last.
a moment without my great past
turns out that im not so fast...

watching here in the sunshine
walking in a very long line

following my heart and its desires
a deadly dragon that breathes fires

(chorus)
O where is thou that helped me through!
Where is that land of all of you?
Im dancing here all by my self..
like a ninja in the night without his stealth..
When i die there will be time
to remember you with all my rhymes
just wait, youll see
my sweet sweet victory


(set 2)
give me that good-bye kiss
feeling like ill never be missed.

please come help me if you can
im not your very average man

i need some love and cherishment
like owl with night and with content

please...
save me....

(chorus)

yea, i kinda think it was ruined but its hard to make things rhyme, plus i dont care what people think, except for the ones i love most..


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  • User Comments: [2]
    eek
    hehehe, you are quite the poet. x3
    Better than me currently. lol

    comment Zelia Darling · Community Member · Wed Oct 17, 2007 @ 05:18am
    that was a lovely poem.^^ i write poems too,and also stories...when i'm not busy with college work.XD

    comment karatechamp · Community Member · Tue Feb 12, 2008 @ 02:33pm
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