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Well this jurnel is well just a jurnel of my borein life that no one would really care to read.

serenity mae
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 @ 03:25am

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	i dont Heres a creepy poem i wrote let me kno if u like it or dont....or think it would be better if i changed somptin bout it!!! ok here goes... some people feel the pain i dont i just feel the same every cut and scrape takes a memory i hate some people feel the pain i dont maybe my heart's solid, as cold as stone cuz i feel no luv even in my home i look out my window and on the street are kids being happy as they sit and eat i wish i could have some of that, people to care for me and hole me tight as i cry if only if only into the night some people feel the pain i dont i just feel the same every cut every scrape takes a memory i hate some people feel the pain i dont i just feel the same as i lay on my floor blood drips from mym arm cuz theres no point in livein anymore some people feel the pain i dont i just feel the same -bye serenity mae (plz dont steel it) but tell me wut u think..i kno its a bit gothic so dont waste ur time tellin me that..thanx 4laugh

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i wish.

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shanlea90
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Commented on: Sat Jun 04, 2005 @ 05:03am


	I like it. I used to relate, but I'm happier now. But I like it a lot, sounds like something I'd write. 4laugh

Commented on: Sun Jun 05, 2005 @ 02:16am


	omg... that's so good! oops... Gabby Girl is calling me... wink

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Commented on: Sun Jun 05, 2005 @ 05:12am


	some gurl wrote this to me bout my poem...do u agree? illanocte Wrote: Your also the furthest thing from a writer. Try spelling words correctly, adding some imagery, et cetera. I hate having to say the same thing to all you crappy writers that clog up this forum. Oh, and by the way- I don't know anyone in their right mind who would steal this.

Commented on: Tue Jun 07, 2005 @ 07:17am


	Quote: Try spelling words correctly, adding some imagery, et cetera. I hate having to say the same thing to all you crappy writers that clog up this forum. Oh, and by the way- I don't know anyone in their right mind who would steal this. That's just harsh. For someone to criticsize spelling that person can't spell etcetera. I liked it, personally.

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