So yeah, now, the second chapter of the story. Will it get more interesting? Well, I dont know, but I doubt it can do worse than the first chapter. Now, another thing I want to say, sound efects, reeeeeally suck. (3rd line of the chapter: OMG, I might as well writen 10 am -.-)
The Monster
“Jorge,
Your father and I went to the shop to buy some bread and milk. We will be back at about 9:55 am. Please make your bed and eat some breakfast.
Love,
Mum and Dad
P.S. clean your bedroom a bit because it is very dirty”
How am I supposed to have breakfast if we don’t have bread and milk? I am going to have to boil an egg but I don’t know how to boil an egg, I’m only 11 years old! I better wait till mum and dad get home and I can have some toast. What time is it anyway? 10:20 am! Mum and dad are so late; I have to eat my breakfast now, I am starved to death! 10:21 am and they are still not home! What am I going to do? I have to eat; I’m just going to try to boil an egg. I hope I do it right. Ok, I remember that mum puts the eggs in a pan. I think. Then she fills the pan with water, and puts in a spoon
fool of oil. Then she gets the large wooden spoon and starts mixing it. What do I do? It’s all a disaster. All the water is splashing out of the pan like if it was a big storm or a tsunami! (OMFG, a tsunami? was i retarded back then?!) That boiling water mixed with oil is splashing all over me!
It finally stopped. How was I supposed to know that I had to turn the gas down? Well that doesn’t matter, I am not going to have breakfast so I will just go and make my bed and get changed to go and look for mum and dad.
Why is my bed covered in Kit-Kat crumbs and Kit-Kat wrappings? I must have fallen asleep eating them.
Ready. I made my bed now I just have to get dressed. I think I am going to have to wear the thick jacket because it looks like it is very chilly outside. Ok, if I were mum and dad were would I go? Ah, I am so stupid. They must be in the shop because they said they were going to the shop. How dumb can I be?
“Mum, Dad!” I shouted just in case they were somewhere near the house.
Silence. That is strange; there is no one in the streets. No cars, no bikes, and the worst of all, no people! Maybe they are having a festival, but if there were a festival I would hear it from here. I better just get on my bike and start off to the shop. I felt like a bullet because I was going so fast. I thought I would fall off but I didn’t I just kept on riding and riding. I got to the shop opened the doors (the little bell that I hate didn’t ring, that’s strange), and there was no one inside; not even the shopkeeper!
“Bum, Poom, Caboom!”
Something was falling from one of the food corridors. Maybe there was someone in the shop but they didn’t hear me because the annoying bell didn’t ring (luckily). I went near the corridor from where the noise came from. I got to one of the corridors. There it was, a strange horrible, bright, golden yellow eyed monster just staring at me with his enormous mouth wide open, with big yellow teeth that covered the whole mouth, including the sharp formed, red, tongue which was covered in saliva.
“ BLUAGH MASHAGH!” that monster started to scream as loud as it could. The windows started to break. The monster got up and gave a wide step forward. I started to run as fast as I could.
“Ahhh!” I screamed as I got cut buy one of the pieces of sharp glass, which was now covered in red drippy blood. The ground started to get covered in blood. As I looked back I saw that horrible monster running after me. I was lucky that it didn’t run so fast or if not I probably be a monster’s breakfast. I ran and I ran for a very long time. Pum! I hit the ground. Now I was all covered with snow mixed with mud. Oh no, now I am going to be a monsters breakfast. Where is it? Why is that horrendous thing not eating one of my arms or legs? It has disappeared! That’s freaky, a minute ago it was right behind me. It must be a ghost or something because it disappeared in a flash! I better star running or if not that thing can appear again.
“POOM POOM POOM!” What is that strange noise?
“Ahhh!” I screamed as that thing appeared behind me.
Run, Run, Run. I better run or if not it will be the great end! I should go back home and hide in there. How good I am near my house.
“Puff, puff, puff,” I am so tired. Why didn’t I grab the bike, and like that I could have rode home. It is true; I can’t be any dumber. Oh no it is getting nearer. It is so near that I can feel its nasty breath on top of me! I can see the roof of my house. I’m getting nearer and nearer. How good I left the door open. I’m in. I locked the door with the keys and the other locks. Few’f that was close! I thought I wouldn’t survive, but now I’m sa…
“Pum”
“Ahhh!” I shouted with all my voice. That monster just broke the door. I have to go out through the other door or that beast will kill me! Oh no, the back door is locked and that horrendous thing is getting into my wonderful house. What should I do? I’ve got an idea. I should go out one of the windows. But first I should call the police to catch the monster. Oh no the telephone doesn’t have any signal. I should just go out through the window. I am finally out.
“Don’t fear any monster, and it will not harm you,” said an old man sitting on a bench in my backyard. I just ran because that stranger could harm me.
When I was already about 100 metres away from my house I heard a loud shout. It must have been the monster eating that poor old man! I should run faster, for that thing could tear me up in half.
Where do I go? The monster already broke into the store and into my house. I know, I can go to Lisa’s house, unless that monster… killed her! Maybe that horrible creature ate every one alive! It is still worth a try to go and see if she or her family is home. It is so good I don’t live so far away from her. I have to cross my fingers that she is there because if not... Oh no here he comes, and he is faster than ever.
“Help!” I screamed.
Silence (except for the monsters and my footsteps).
Why? Why doesn’t anyone answer me back? Where is everyone?
How good I’m getting nearer to Lisa’s house.
Knock, knock, knock! Anyone home?”
“Hi Jorge, come in, come in,” Lisa said to me.
She seemed much happier than before, much more.
“So now you’ve decided to be happier and kinder?”
“Was I mean to you yesterday?” she asked.
“Well, in a way you were, you didn’t say thank you when I gave you the jacket and when I kindly made you some hot chocolate.”
“Oh, I’m so sorry,” she kindly answered back.
“Bang, bang, bang!” Someone was knocking at the door.
“Oh, I better go and open the door, it might be your mother who said she was looking for you,” said Lisa as she went to open the door.
“No, don’t open it!” I screamed as loud as I could.
It was to late. Once she opened the door the monster jumped on top of her and started to bite her arm off. I couldn’t do anything about it and I was so scared that I ran off. I could hear the screaming of my friend. But I just kept on running. I went past Lisa’s front door and the monster wasn’t there anymore, but I noticed that Lisa was also missing! It is impossible that the monster ate Lisa so fast. I started to cry a bit because now my best friend was gone forever. The strange thing was that she said that my mother was looking for me, but she was gone for a long time and I didn’t see her go down the street where the shop was. That was very strange.
“Pum, pum, pum!”
What is that noise? Oh no, not again. The monster. I don’t want to run any more! I give up. I have to let it eat me now. It is the end. I didn’t expect it would end like this. What, it disappeared again! Why does it do this to me?
“Boo!”
“Ahhh!” that monster reappeared. Run run run as fast as I can. I’m heading towards the worst place in the whole world! The skiing area! What do I do? It is the only place where this road takes me.
I am stuck! What do I do? What do I do? Lucky me. There is some skiing equipment right here. But I hate skiing. I am scared! My only chance of saving my self is by jumping. What can I do?
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