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Pretty much my journal will be used for the purpose of posting what I've written so far in some of my ideas for novels. Feel free to comment and give me some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.
~Summon Chaos~


There exists in this world two main types of magic. White Magic, used to heal, protect the weak, and strengthen their protectors, along side White, there is also Black Magic, used to attack and destroy.

Black Magic is often referred to as Dark Magic, a force of nothing but evil and chaos.

But, one thing seems to have been forgotten, just because something is dark does not mean it is evil, just dark.

Now, let me present to you a tale of one, who has shown the difference between dark, and evil!

In the land of Azuron there is no greater school of magic then Drathirei Academy, school of the Grande Arcane.

Here is where some of the greatest Sorcerers and Sorceresses of they’re time have been taught, and within it lies the next mages to make history.

At the beginning of the year every new student takes part in a summoning ritual, bringing forth a creature to act as they’re companion and guide to the world of magic.

Now, enough with the technical stuff. Let me introduce you to the star of this little tale

A young Mage named Siks….

“Alright, next up is….Jonathan Sunstrider” The head Summoner called out as he approached the edge of the circle, a cloaked boy coming towards him “Now, extend your hand” The man instructed to the boy, who nodded and did as told. Upon his hands arrival above the circle the man stabbed it slightly with a small knife, then blood sliding off the blade and onto the circle.

After that the man and several others began to chant, the circle beginning to glow a teal like colour as the blood merged with the circle. Then, with a flash of light a small white hound appeared in the middle of the circle and approached the boy. The Summoner smiled and nodded “Very good now….Siks…hmm…no last name….well Siks would you please come here!?” The man shouted out.

An oddly dressed boy stepped forward, a mask covering his face “I’m…I’m here” He said nervously beside the man, extending his hand as he knew he should, his eyes closed behind the mask. He never could stand the sight of blood.

The Summoner nodded and took the blood from Siks hand, beginning the ritual immediately after. A gasp came from the crowd, the Summoner with holding their surprise until the ritual was over. For while they chanted instead of teal the glow of the circle an ominous blood read, the flash of light followed by a blood curdling cry. The Summoner gasped at what sat in the center of the circle, the creatures gleaming red eyes fixed upon Siks. The Summoner looked to Siks for a moment and then called for the others to come to his side immediately, the crowd inching away in fear and bewilderment. For what sat in the summoning circle, the creature that was supposed to guide Siks, was a Dark Dragon, something that for generations had become the symbol of a Dark Wizard.

The Summoners looked at one another nervously after looking at the dragon once more, the creature taking a step closer, sniffing the air as it looked around the room.

It then looked at Siks, its eyes starring straight into his My name is Rorick. These words echoed inside Siks head for a moment before he realized it was the dragon, but that was about to be last thing on his mind.

The room echoed as the large oaken doors slammed open, a dozen armored wizards entering the room, the schools headmaster at the back. The Wizards scattered around the circle, each preparing a different spell just incase. The headmaster then strode over to Siks, a grim expression on his face. He looked to the Summoner “Is this the boy?” He asked, adjusting his spectacles for a moment. The Summoner quickly nodded, before taking a step back as to get out of the way.

The Headmaster then took Siks by the arm and began to drag him away, the dragon padding slowly behind them, the wizards following it carefully.

Eventually they reached their destination, the schools front doors, the headmaster looked at Siks grimly before throwing him out the door, the dragon being magically hurled with him “I’m afraid that, due to suspicions that you may one day become a dark wizard, we have no choice but to expel you from this academy, and should you ever return your dragon shall be killed, and you will be incarcerated…” With that the headmaster slammed the doors shut.

Siks blinked twice, a stunned and confused look on his face as he sat they’re on the ground. He then looked to the dragon and back to the school “What have I gotten myself into…” Was all he said as the dragon sat down beside him.

To Be Continued…


Grey Moonfang IV
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  • User Comments: [11]
    Oh, write more write more!!!

    comment ctrdragon · Community Member · Wed Aug 22, 2007 @ 01:35am
    very impressive! please continue this! heart

    comment Reiko Namikiri · Community Member · Sun Sep 09, 2007 @ 04:19am
    Intriguing! I actually found myself wondering what was in store for Siks and Rorick.

    comment Arthur Sataine · Community Member · Mon Nov 26, 2007 @ 06:29am
    This is nice. I would recommend however, that you use a word program for your grammar can be off at times. I wish you would have described the scenery more; it was a bit confusing. Also, I think adding something to the beginning, such as the anticipation of getting his guide or whatever or being at the school for a while prior to the ritual would have added more to the character and story.

    comment hellomandy · Community Member · Sat Dec 01, 2007 @ 12:13am
    I'd like to point out several things to you princess. One, I never originally had any intention of continuing this story, I only wrote it as a description for an Avi Arena entry of mine awhile back, but there was only so much room, in fact this whole thing didn't even make it in, I had to shorten it greatly....on another note I DID use a Word Program stare

    comment Grey Moonfang IV · Community Member · Sat Dec 01, 2007 @ 07:47am
    its a very good story Grey. you should continue it on, i'd like to read more it's very interesting to me. ^_^

    comment devilzwarlock · Community Member · Sun Dec 09, 2007 @ 08:48pm
    Well, I agree with Princess Mandy. And you didn't have to be so harsh to her. We figured this to be a story you were working on, since you said "to be continued" and you hadn't specified what it was for. I still see some grammar problems too, though.

    comment Noelani Rules · Community Member · Fri Feb 01, 2008 @ 03:41am
    Why aren't you writing more?

    comment ctrdragon · Community Member · Mon Jun 09, 2008 @ 02:35am
    Good job Grey... reminds me of something I was planning on doing..*Remembers the story she was going to write but stopped cause a friend laughed at her and her prologue...*

    comment Xx_Close_To_Crazy_xX · Community Member · Fri Aug 15, 2008 @ 10:13am
    You should deffinatly write more of this. It's an amazing idea, really and trully.

    comment Aristaline · Community Member · Fri Sep 19, 2008 @ 03:34am
    that is so good heart

    comment fox of suicidal dreams · Community Member · Tue Jan 05, 2010 @ 07:17pm
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