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kiwigal
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My red baloon (a poem)
I lost you at a picnic
you flew so high up there
your red skin shining
tail whipping through the air
I thought that I could catch you
if only I could reach
but the limits of the sky
I could not breach
so I watched you from a far
as you soared through the blue
to this very day
I still think of you.

I hope you guys like it !this is the first time I ever put out my poems online. sweatdrop





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Shikomiso
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comment Commented on: Wed Aug 22, 2007 @ 05:21am
Wow I like how you made the poem seem like it's talking about a balloon when really it's a person that you miss

Anyway, sorry for not commenting on your journals like I promised. I will this time! biggrin


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