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Stay until Wednesday comes and write a child like letter pretending...
Silently Reposed
City breeze, street lamp haze
Winter freeze, star sought gaze
Pheonix flame, it's all the same
Engulfing summer greens; lazy lake scenes
"Return to our seaside sand
I'll carry on without a helping hand"

Sirens blare beyond the walls
Eyes flare inside mind's halls
Cliff grass; pine tree
- Bliss -
A Wind's kiss, folly
Forget the Christmas Holly

In quiet nights I pondered
Of the dreams with which I wondered
Silence engulfing every thought
An alliance with which I coiuld not have fought
Glowing lights from memories of December
Flowing sights seeping from a dying ember
In the cold I fall down, mistaken
Within a fold, it's hualed up.
- Love -
Broken.

Where're the smiles?
Open up the files.
What're these tears?
More hated fears.
Who's the lucky one?
Just another lost son.
When're the tolling bells?
Here use these shaken shells.
Why're they frowning through hidden hints
When they're really crowning a prince?
How's she taking it?
Just bit by bit
After all he had just proposed
Before he was sent away,
- Silently Reposed -

If you're wondering what it means here's an explanation...

The first verse is when the soldier has just proposed to his love but he has to go off to see so he's promising to return to her.

The second verse is when he's on the mission, but he's dying and remembering a time with his love, and how she'll be alone that X-mas.

The third verse is the girl, remembering her fears, and how they came true. She's also trying to forget him, but everything brings him up. And she can no longer love because she was broken by her loss.

The last verse is the wedding day of her arranged marriage. All her relatives are asking her questions and she's answering blankly. When they say: "Why are you sad on a day like this" she responds with "Because they're crowning a prince." They think she means her husband and are glad for her, but she's remembering her love in heaven and she secretly thinks, as she walks down the aisle, that her love is waiting for her, silently resting in the black tux that is the husband she must now agree to marry.

>.> Depressing I know and alot of background info. xP


Sirako
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  • User Comments: [1]
    thats a nice poem or song.

    comment Suicidal_Love_Shadow · Community Member · Sun Aug 12, 2007 @ 01:31am
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