I wrote another song while I was being emo
My Beating Heart On The Floor
I have no reasons
to drag this blade
across my wrist
I hide behind
A smileing mask
To fake like its ok
Chorus
I'm a pawn
In my own mind game
I say cheap words
A force a smile
The Blood has fallen
And stained your skin
A posion so pure
I'm addicted
No More Reasons
No More Life
Chorus
I'm a pawn
In my own mind game
I say cheap words
A force a smile
I took all that was mine
A heart left
beating on the floor
Blood spilt for a cure
Blood shead to smile
Chorus
I'm a pawn
In my own mind game
I say cheap words
A force a smile
I force a smile x3
No more reasons
To drag this blade
across my wrist
(A pawn)My own mind game
Right here crying
Bleeding myself to death
I fell
fell so low
I couldent stand up
I fell
fell so far
I couldent come back
Chorus x3
I'm a pawn
In my own mind game
I say cheap words
A force a smile
like it or not tell me
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1) Down at the second to last part: it's couldn't not couldent.
2) I think you should change the last part of the chorus to, "And force a smile" or "While I force a smile." Ya?
But other than that I really liked it.