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My Poetry I Have Completed So Far
This is a journal with only my poetry inside, please feel free 2 ask about, or please comment on my poetry. Abuse me/Amuse me
She Is Everything...
A soft touch of fate nudges him gently forward,
as if it was the beginning of all to come by.
A breath so soft and subtle you could hear angels sing,
continuing peace all around her with her beauty.
Eyes so full of determination and continuity,
for a deep and beautiful shade of blue emerges.
Lips soft at the touch,
that knock him off his feet every time they meet his.

A personality so serene as to make time itself pause,
and even if just for a moment,
he is completed.
Her beautiful smile,
complimented with consistent rosy cheeks,
making her ever so perfect.
Amazing soft hair,
dark blonde and soft as silk itself to touch.
Tender hands and warmth so comforting,
it takes his breath away.

A love for her so full it hurts.
He whispers in her ear,
as he holds her close in her arms:
"I have never become so swept up in such beauty,
with awe I gaze upon you.
Eyes so pure and loving,
and a warmth of compassion i could have only ever imagined..."
He goes silent for a moment and takes a deep breath,
then quietly speaks into her ear:
"...Until i met you"

Dodexora
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  • User Comments: [5]
    cheddar than you
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    Fri Jun 29, 2007 @ 04:16am


    eek eek eek eek eek eek eek eek
    for lack of jaw dropping/fainting emoticons


    Im_A_Bi_Gurl
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    Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 07:31am


    That was so beautiful! So detailed, and touching. You are truly a great poet!


    XxRaidenZeroxX
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    Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 08:23pm


    nice where is the rest of ur poetry


    05_music_is_life_05
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    Sat Sep 08, 2007 @ 03:53pm


    omg liam u r amazinggggggg... heart


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