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Hatsuharubabe
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a story i made
The One

Once upon a time there was a really HOT guy named Kyo, who lived in Japan. He had a huge crush on a girl named Tohru. Kyo had a cousin named Yuki, who was also HOT, Yuki new that Kyo loved Tohru, but he too secretly loved her. Kyo begun to get suspicious of Yuki because he had been spending a lot of time with Tohru. One day Yuki saw Tohru in the park by his house. She was sitting there wearing a cherry blossom dress, reading a book. Yuki thought she looked so peaceful, there in the shade. Slowly he started to walk toward her, she looked up from her book and smiled, and he blushed and grinned back. Tohru said, “I’m just reading a comedy about a dog, a cat, and a mouse, see they…” Unfortunately Yuki wouldn’t find out what they did because he wasn’t paying attention to anything other than her beauty. While Yuki was practically drooling over her, Tohru continued, “…and that is how the mouse was..., Yuki, what’s wrong?” Yuki came out of his daze. “Oh, I was um, just wondering if you wanted to go to my brother, Ayame’s shop.” Tohru said she would, so they were off.

Meanwhile, Kyo is going crazy because he had gone to Tohru’s house and she wasn’t there, and Yuki was late for lunch. Things were getting suspicious. After he had searched the whole house for Yuki, he decided to go and visit Ayame.

(Going back to Tohru and Yuki.)

When they got to Ayame’s shop they looked at the sign to figure out what he sold, but it was just a bunch of lines. Ayame looked out of his window and saw them coming. He said “ohh Yuki, I knew you would find a woman someday!!” Both Yuki and Tohru blushed extremely.
When Kyo finally got to Ayame’s shop, it was to see Tohru’s long dirty blonde hair whip out of sight inside. Yuki was already inside and he was very surprised to see: Momiji, a very cute middle school boy, Hatsuharu, a very HOT middle school boy, & to his utmost horror, Akito. Akito looked at Yuki with an evil grin on her face. Yuki looked at Tohru with eyes that plainly stated “this was a bad idea.” Akito turned to Tohru and said “go on, we were only talking.” Ayame decided he could talk now, “okay, let’s get Tohru in a dress. Oh yes, Yuki I think you should pick.

When they were walking into the next room Tohru stopped and looked at the main room. While she was looking she noticed two other boys in the corner. They looked nothing like the girl with the red eyes in front of her, they looked so kind, and their faces didn’t look so worn either. One had blonde hair, brown eyes, and looked like a middle schooler (two years younger than her). The other boy was much taller, had white/black hair, gray eyes, and looked about 15 years old (same age as her). The Blondie looked at her with kind eyes and a big smile. The taller boy looked at her with eyes that, no doubt about it said, “hey babe!” Yuki finally figured out why Tohru was blushing so much. He shot the boy a “she’s with me!” look and he, Tohru, and Ayame went into the room. Once they got in, Ayame closed the door and a very pretty woman came in through another, wearing a maid’s outfit. Tohru got one look at Yuki and she was yanked into a side door by the woman. The woman said “Put on that white dress and then I will fix your hair!” While Tohru was putting on the dress she started to wonder what Kyo was doing and where he was.

Back in Time

Once Kyo saw Tohru’s hair disappear into the shop he knew Yuki was in there too. He waited outside for a few minutes until he thought he could come in and get Tohru. Kyo walked into the store, and he, just like Yuki was very surprised to see: Momij, Hatsuharu, and, for the first time in a long time, Akito. Momiji was eating a lolly-pop, Hatsuharu was messing with his earrings, and Akito was staring into Kyo’s eyes like she had been waiting for him. Kyo tore his eyes away from Akito’s, looked at Hatsuharu, and asked “is Tohru here?” Akito answered first, “yes”. Her tone was indifferent. Momij pointed to the side door and Hatsuharu said “Ohh, that really hot chick who came here with Yuki. I see he finally found a woman.” This statement made Kyo hate Yuki so much, he started to stomp toward the door. Momiji blocked the door from him and said “No!” He glared at Kyo until he sat down, but kept blocking the door.

At the Present, with Yuki and Tohru

“Are you ready?” the woman asked Tohru. “Umm, yeah” Tohru responded. The woman opened the door, Tohru walked out in her beautiful silk dress, and her hair put up like she’s a bride. As she walks over to them, she asks “So, how do I look?” Ayame was the first to answer because Yuki was dumbstruck, “Ohh, Tohru you look so beautiful, like a princess in her wedding gown!!” There was a slightly awkward silence. Ayame broke it at once, “well Yuki are you going to pamper this young woman or shall I?” He leaned over and grabbed Tohru’s waist and pulled her close to him in one swift move. He kept leaning closer and closer and closer and Tohru could have sworn that she felt his lips touch hers, when suddenly Yuki smacked him upside the head! Ayame fell to the floor and Yuki gently grabbed Tohru’s hand and acted like nothing had happened. They sat down on a nearby bench. Yuki looked directly into Tohru’s eyes and said “Tohru, I think you look very beautiful in that dress, in fact I think you look beautiful all the time.” Tohru had no idea how to respond to that comment because nobody had ever said anything so nice to her before. She looked into the mirror on the wall and saw that she was blushing majorly. She looked back at Yuki and saw that he was blushing too. She also noticed that he was slowly scooting closer to her. “Umm, Tohru, I was just wondering if you might uh, maybe, like wanna be my girlfriend.” Yuki stammered. Tohru thought she was probably scarlet. She finally answered “I …, well I …I guess the only thing I can say is, why didn’t you ask me sooner?” Yuki was so happy that he leaned into her, kissed her on the cheek, and whispered “I don’t know, but thank you.” Then, very suddenly he stood up and said “Well, I suppose we could stay here and look at each other with glossy eyes, but Kyo is probably wondering if I died, so we should go. After you, my princess.” He smiled at her and she giggled.

So Tohru and Yuki come out of the room, Tohru giggling, and Yuki with a face that says “Cha-Ching!”(Yes!!) The second that Yuki set his foot in the room, looked up, and Tohru said “Hi Kyo”, something huge hits him in the side of his head. The only thing he knew before he hit the floor was: he heard Tohru scream, he saw blood on his hands, Kyo was getting his fist ready for another blow, and Akito had knocked Tohru out and he could not help her.

When Tohru woke up she was in an unfamiliar house lying in an unfamiliar bed and her side really hurt. She sat up and was very surprised to see Ayame, the woman from the store, and the two cute boys. The tall boy with the white/black hair looked at her and said “Sup, the name’s Hatsuharu, and you must be the gorgeous Tohru. You really shouldn’t get up right now, you’re weak.” Tohru lay back down and asked “Is Yuki okay?” Hatsuharu smiled at her and responded, “Yes, but I was wondering what happened between you two? I mean, you’re really cute, he didn’t do anything did he?” Tohru blushed, and the blonde boy giggled and said “Kyo’s mad because Yuki got to get handsy with Tohru and Kyo really loves her. Ohh! By the way, I’m Momiji.” Tohru was stunned by this news, “Kyo likes, no, wait Kyo loves me???? Oh well, I have a boyfriend.” Hatsuharu grinned, “Sooo, what did Yuki touch to make you say yes?” Ayame finally came into the conversation, “As much as I would love to talk about my brother’s love life, I think we should talk about more important things like, well let’s see, how about his health!!! Tohru, you can go check on him while we talk, okay?” Tohru was glad for an excuse to not answer Hatsuharu’s question, “okay, umm, where is he?” Momiji pointed sadly to a door down the hallway. Tohru opened the door and saw him sitting in a chair by a window. He had a bandage around his head and looked oddly happy! “Yuki, how are you?” Tohru thought she might cry. Yuki turned around, grinned, walked over to her, and answered “I’m just glad that you’re okay. Kyo surprised me, but I’ll be all right.” This news made her cheer up a lot, so much actually that she leaned up to his height and kissed him. Yuki was surprised at first, but then he held on to her for what felt like an hour. When they finally broke apart, they were both blushing extremely. Yuki asked “So, did you find out what happened after we came out of the side room? I only saw slivers before I was knocked out.” Tohru thought for a second, “Umm, I only saw you get knocked out, and then everything went blurry.”
Yuki stood up and said, “Let’s go ask Hatsuharu.” He opened the door and Tohru followed him out it. Hatsuharu was sitting at the table talking to Ayame and Momiji wasn’t in the room. Yuki went up to the table, sat down, and Tohru did the same. Yuki asked “So Hatsuharu, what happened?” Hatsuharu looked at him and said “Well, when you and Tohru came out of the side room, Kyo was standing there waiting, and he knocked you out so fast that I barely saw it. Then Akito grabbed Tohru by her hair and knocked her out also, before I could do anything. You have a bandage on your head because while I was trying to calm Kyo down, he slammed your head in the door. While Ayame and Momiji were holding Akito back and I was attending to your wounds, Kyo must have thought that it was a perfect time to go and take Tohru, but Ayame told Momiji to go help her, and that he could handle Akito. I have no idea how Momiji won, but he did. Momiji pulled Kyo off of Tohru and laid her on that bed over there, while I was getting Yuki into that room over there, and Ayame was locking Akito outside. That’s all I remember.” Ayame looked satisfied because of Tohru and Yuki’s stunned faces but picked up the story, “After Akito’s banging died down and Kyo started snoring, we figured it was safe to go to bed.” Tohru sat up a little straighter, but did not, in the least bit look worried, “So, where is Kyo?” Momiji answered “He left in the middle of the night.” Tohru jumped because she hadn’t noticed him coming in during Hatsuharu’s explanation.

Yuki stood up and said “Thanks for the walk-through. Tohru, may I walk you home?” Tohru blushed, “Of course!” She stood up, smiled at them all and said, “Thank you for your hospitality!” Yuki held the door open for Tohru, and as she was smiling at him, she heard three voices say “No problem!” And they left. So Tohru and Yuki walked hand in hand to her house. When they got there Yuki said “I’m really glad that you said yes to me. I promise that I will satisfy your needs for a boyfriend.” Tohru blushed and looked around to make sure nobody heard that. Before she knew what had happened Yuki had grabbed her around the waist and pulled her into another one of his long, pepperminty kisses. After their kiss was over she said “You know, you’re a really good kisser.” Yuki grinned and said “Thanks, you are too, ohh, don’t worry about Kyo, he’ll get used to us being together.” Tohru smiled and said “Okay, well, bye.” Yuki turned around, waved over his shoulder, and said “See Ya!” Then he walked away. Tohru smiled to herself and turned to go inside, but something caught her eye. Kyo was sitting in a tree staring at her, crying. Tohru glared at him and went to sleep, making sure that the door was locked. Kyo knew that he had ruined any chance that he may have had with Tohru. When Yuki got home, he was so happy, because he knew that he had found the one.

Sorry about any and all spelling mistakes.



By: Emily Walker





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Hatsuharubabe
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comment Commented on: Fri Jun 15, 2007 @ 07:08pm
PLEASE COMMENT!!!


comment Commented on: Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 04:55pm
It's a nice story, really good, but Kyo is supposed to be the main character right? He was introduced first, and with detail, so doesn't that make him the main? How sad that he loses out on the girl, so very sad. But I guess thats life huh? Not every character can come out the winner, sad though. That was bad for Yuki to do, knowing full well, yet still acting on his own feelings. I hope there's a second part, I like this story!! biggrin xd It's Awesome!



Caden-pocaigue
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Hatsuharubabe
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comment Commented on: Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 05:02pm
that was the end but i guess i can add a second part...


comment Commented on: Fri Jun 29, 2007 @ 11:51am
lol that sounds an awfully lot like fruits basket XD



jovanni376
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Hatsuharubabe
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comment Commented on: Mon Jul 02, 2007 @ 07:02pm
ya, it's based on fruits basket


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