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Do you realize how many holes there would be if people just took the time to take the dirt out of them?
My crappy poem!
Like I said, it's not too good, but I liked it!

sunset smile
a smile that fades,
the last of its kind,
it falls away, to biodegrade.
the thought of its existence, wiped from heart and mind.

Next comes the sunset,
sinking below the earth,
in too deep and too hard to get.
lost and never knowing its true worth.

Then comes the rain,
sliding down the planet's complexion,
showing the pain,
showing depression
showing what no one will ever know.

finally the pain is at rest,
the eye of the storm,
sleep will be the test,
to arise again at morn.

a perfect smile,
one to light up the world,
lost, all because she's just a silly girl.
she closes her eyes,
trying her best,
trying for a break,
a break from "depressed"

well, what do you think?






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Sexy Cute Super Potatoe
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 15, 2005 @ 10:34pm
I wike it!!!! heart


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 15, 2005 @ 10:42pm
thank you!



kakitura
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CPT. REIGN UZUKI
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commentCommented on: Sun May 15, 2005 @ 05:06am
i love it hon


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