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I wrote this a few weeks ago!!!


Rigor_V
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I know what I want....
I want blood!
Give it to me in a flood
let their corpses litter the streets
YES! OH YES!! Wouldn't it be sweet
The weak would parish at our command
the jobs at the morgue would be in high demand..
spare only the innocent and good child
the rest shall be punished like game in the wild
The ones in power will come first
it is their blood for whom I thirst
let us cleanse this horrid land
let us leave this world with blood soaked hands!!!
Our will, our voice? It will not be denied!!
The only thing left will be us...
with our hands held high.

I went for a more dark theme to my poety....I am one of those who know corruption when I see it...and it angers me to the point of violence! The day will come when those like myself, will finally be pushed to far and explode....Where will you be on that day?

I hoped you liked it!! I am getting alot of good comments so far....I want to see what you think of this!!





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Marshie Funtime
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comment Commented on: Tue Jun 05, 2007 @ 04:29am
I must say, that was pretty awesome. Full of power...bwahaha. XP


comment Commented on: Tue Jun 05, 2007 @ 03:46pm
heart this is very deep!!! and dark!!! i really do like this!!!!! I love how you put the theme together..this is totaly awessome heart heart



prittyprincess2006
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so-stupid-geek
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comment Commented on: Wed Jun 06, 2007 @ 09:38am
wink you got nice poetry. i might think you're full of revenge. anyway, i love it. heart heart heart


comment Commented on: Fri Jun 08, 2007 @ 03:27pm
I like this one and the one before it the best...they are my faves...and you've got it all wrong..you are WAY!!!! better than I at this whole poetry thing...I LOVE IT!



eternal crimson nite
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prittyprincess2006
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comment Commented on: Wed Jun 27, 2007 @ 04:13pm
this is truely deep heart I love it though...
Im speechless heart 4laugh


comment Commented on: Wed Jun 27, 2007 @ 04:17pm
OMG

OMG I LOVE THIS!!!!! this is soo deep heart I really heart the theme of it all.
you truely are amazing heart



2good2beforgoten
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