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I wrote this a few weeks ago!!!


Rigor_V
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Now do you see it
do you know it
do you feel it
is its essence seen aloud
evil comes in many form
just as you did when you were born
it attacks from within and devours the soul
and you are oblivious even when it has taken its toll
You can not escape this horrid black
and once you accept it there is no turning back
you have to look ahead to the light
it alone will tame your horrible plight
i have done it, so can you
so if we stand together.....
There is nothing the evil can do

sorry....that was not one of my best, but I wanted to give you something, today gonk gonk gonk gonk





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MixxyMoo
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comment Commented on: Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 09:37pm
I love it!! Your poems say so much! I love the way you write!


comment Commented on: Mon Jun 04, 2007 @ 05:36pm
This was good heart I really love it!!!! Literally you are such a good poet!!!!!! I love how you use your words.... heart Great job!!!



prittyprincess2006
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2good2beforgoten
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comment Commented on: Wed Jun 27, 2007 @ 04:18pm
heart heart I love it!!!
Its deep,but yet soo meaningful 2 me crying
you reall do have such good writing abilties heart


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