FIRST ENTRY!
"Tortured"
"Tortured"
She woke up on the floor with an excruciating pain. Her legs felt like they were broken. She had small cuts all over her body. She looked around the room. She was surrounded by four stone walls. No doors, no windows. She looked at herself. She was stripped of her clothes. All she had on were her bra, panties, and a belt. She was chained on to the floor. She had a scythe next to her. On the floor, all over the room, there were razorblades and broken glass everywhere. She noticed a monkey that had bled to death. She heard someone walk into the room. She froze. The person came up beside her, kneeled down, and said to her in a deep, whispery voice, "do not say a word. Do not turn around. Just listen to me." She nodded. "I'm sure you're wondering why you are here. It's quite simple, really. You used to cut yourself, hoping you would die. But, you always missed the vein because you were afraid to die. You were one of the people who took life forgranted. Now you have a choice of life or death. Look around you. You see nothing but stone walls, razorblades, glass, a dead monkey, and a scythe on the floor. You can also tell that your legs have been broken. There is only one way out of here. There is a door some where in this room. First, you must have a key to unlock it. I have the key hidden inside that dead monkey over there. You must find it. Take the scythe and cut the monkey open. You must dig around inside the body and find it. Once you have found it, you must look around the room and find the door. You have 24 hours. If you don't find the key in time, then you will die. Either from bleeding to death or lack of oxygen. Good luck."
(I could go further into the story, but I'll leave it like this for now.)
"World So Cold" by Mudvayne (Saw movie clips)
"World So Cold" by Mudvayne (Saw movie clips)
Final Results
Title: Tortured
Score: 7.1879
Total Ratings: 306
Total Comments: 92
Rank: 0
Comments you received
Katsnya
Nice.
pluiie
william7z8tu2
Cool
Disgraceful Pearl
Emooooooo...
QueenPhoenixFire
Good luck!
Anon E Moose122
well... this is friendly
echo948499
Omg this is colorful :]
ahmahgawd
xd
Dark Heartagram
nice job ^.^ you did a really goods job hun
`adeline`
Jealousy is a wasted emotion. Which is why I
recycl
Always_Amnesia
10
ODINS choise
its nice to see a lady in chains... smile
Razor Sharp Kisses
Good luck~
[Arrow]
D:! SET j00 FREEE!!!!
littile_amanda
love it 10/10
Deerdra
I like her!
KendraMiko
HI! I'm voting for you. I like the outfit and the
stroy! YOU GET A 10!
Kitazaga
well it's interesting in the least
gaaraofthesandcountry
BUMPQ ^^ DING FRIES ARE DONE 10/10
Princess_Allie
wow
glea123
aw
Kenji Mori
xD
ancestor907012
pretty cute
~[peNgeuIn]~
WOO!!!! best avitar i've ever seen! ;] 10/10!
chii323117
10
ndsguerms 9006
hmm.. this is friendly
soulesswanderer
to me it is plain .....but the story makes it 10x
better 10/10
King Dorkalicious
THIS IS A 10/10!!! ^_^
chii323117
i love the avi i vote 10/10
BigK007
3
Zeke the Fallen one
Looks awsome 10/10
The Darkness Of You
Awesome avatar
Demonata Mistress
im goin for that look to look like you got there
first biggrin anywho its ace i give ya a 10 for it my
dream is on my profile sadly i dont think the momo
goes.
Starlessangels
Very nice story. And this looks even
better... Even though I'm not a fan of... Skimpy
clothing like that. =/ A 10/10. =D =P
deathsam
cute!!! 10
whitefire728
not bad
BabySparx
Nice.
Celestial Firefly
...
gaffarty_04
Nice.
Tsukino-kun412
cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Inguz
Kinky... Lmao
Shadow_Leonhart
...."
gir_ninja+3
eek omg save the ******** momo! 8/10
animechick36
...
yuiotokido
not bad
Lalaworld
10
Bumsnudel
lol
round778510
I'm jealous razz
angel of bloody hell
it original il give you that ^_^ you did good
kawar
you look sexy so you get a 10
not_your_av_pixie
Sorta like SAW, nice. this is the first I've seen
of this idea. So in other words I think it's
originale.
Fuzz E Panda
strange at best
devilrider33
aw u poor soul
jeje441
i love it
operationqwe
ok
Gaz_Girl_2dope
=) You a fellow jugglette?
everythingwastaken
4/10
kawehi-oh-confused-lover
ooooooooh i remember that part... that was
awesome... X)
SilverMarine
nice
rqqthmim
Nicley done..
Synnovea
ok
ResonantWings
not bad
Cineya
A bit too plain.
benzino187
cool
angryfisheatenbycat
Someone's been watching too much saw.
Sango_chan243
nice story. kinda gory, but it makes some sense.
it gets an 8
`adeline`
Interesting story
Dark-itachi400
awsome
xexrcuxi
great!!!!!
custom101057
Ahh!... quite good wee!
guitargirl365
ytjtyhethy
tinkerbellex
lol nice
Bubble_Shrimp7852
okay???
boobalooba232
this is amazing
Baby Gizmo
Thanks for voting guys! 4laugh You know, if you
read the story, you'll understand more behind the
outfit. Yes, I understand it's kinda plain, but,
it goes with the story...
x Tea Leaves x
quite interesting
ytel11
very nice like it^^
demonry2
good
galiz sadcomus
cool
thermoplastick_________x
...
She`s
20/10 xd That is some crazy s**t.
mule a joaopaulo1511
bump
Phyfe
nice
xXenter name hereXx
be mine
4everinlight
wow
cuban demon
nice take off bra lol jk but nice
Dixxie13
I'm sure you're wondering why she here. It's quite
simple, really. She used to cut yourself, hoping
you would die. But, you always missed the vein
because she was afraid to die. She is one of the
people who took life forgranted. Now she has a
choice of life or death. There is only one way out
of here. She must find the key that is hiden in
the monkey using the scythe, get the key and
unlock herself. Then, she has to walk on
razorblades and broken glass to find the door out.
She has 5 hours. If she doesn't make it in time,
she will either die of blood loss or lack of
oxygen. Wish her luck.
emopunkqueen
..........
hotpinkhandbag
Like the green hair, dislike the emo.
ArTeMiS_VeNuS
ohhh =( you is cruel sorry but you avi is scary
and tetric sorry 4
Cocacolabandit48
Ahh!... so joyful
Sarah_Malaria
im loving the look on momos face ha ha
