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My first poem: Sorrowful Sights
This is my very first poem. I think I wrote it like 2 or 3 months ago. Oh well. Yeah. There it is. Tell me what you think ^^


Sorrowful Sights

Sorrowful sights and dreadful midnights
Fill me with tears of pain.
When I hear the cry of many children I turn my head in shame,
Of what I might do when they come for you
I will change my ways I will fight back
Because now I have things they lack
I have something on my side and now I will never hide
From evil faces and frightful places.
Never hide from anything again because now I have
A love that will never end.


Silstra
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  • User Comments: [2]
    Very Nice Poem I Like It Very Much

    comment xBling · Community Member · Tue May 08, 2007 @ 09:34pm
    ~*~ This Poem says So Much About You In Just A Few Creatively Penned Lines! You Are A Spiritual, Sensitive, Caring And Wonderful Person Who Is Extremely Empathetic And Intuitive! You Deeply Wish That You Could Remove All The Cruelties That ALL Beings On Mother Earth Are Forced To Suffer... You Also Want To Protect Mother Earth And ALL Her Beloved Animals And Creatures! You Want ALL To
    Attain To A Much Higher Level Of Loving~Kindness And Spiritual Enlightenment!
    You Are Filled With Spiritual Love And Cannot Bear To See Suffering! How's That
    For My L@@KING Into Your Heart? We Have Much In Common! heart ~*~ CeLeStiaL-WisDoM ~*~ 4laugh


    comment CeLeStiaL WiZDoM WeAsLeY · Community Member · Wed May 09, 2007 @ 06:41pm
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