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Ode to Johanna
Your auburn locks burn bright as fire,
but pale in comparison to the passion of my fire for you
Your smile lights up the room, but
fades in brilliance to the light you've brought to my life
Your laughter rings with the symphony of a thousand
bells, but does not compare in beauty to the
music that pours from my soul when
I think of you
Comments (2 Comments)
- Seele01 - 10/20/2011
- what was wrong with the grammar. there aren't periods, but its a poem, i don't have to put periods, and i just noticed i didn't have the entry, if you want to see the full version, just pm me
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- Reaper2601 - 10/20/2011
- nicely done if it wasnt for the grammer and lack of pulling me in it would of been higher
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