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Those two together
always forever
Though parents denied them
their love was an anthem
Her mind grew weak
and their relationship looked bleak
The boy she loved the best,
a knife slid into his chest
a while away she cried
and across her neck the knife began to slide
In the hospital she awoke
and from then she never spoke
her plan had failed
his ship had sailed
a plan for eternal love
foiled by her parents and god above
in jail a song of love she sang
and in the end from her window she did hang
her ghost now ponders
where her true love now wanders
The judge and jury died
soon after underground her parents lied
Now the two together forever in love
her down below and him up above
- by zombieninja12 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/25/2010 |
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- Title: Tragedy in romance
- Artist: zombieninja12
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Description:
sorry if this isn't really good. usually i write free-verse non rhyming poems. I am not that good at rhyming. and this does not tell a true story.
their parents denied them love so she took a knife... - Date: 05/25/2010
- Tags: tragety
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Comments (4 Comments)
- aya Fujimiya_Omi Takatori - 06/06/2010
- Wow, this one is Really good, especially compared to the others on here. Very well done, 5/5 I Really enjoyed it. It doesn't even have to rhyme to be good, the words are all that matter. And yours Definitely had words that held meaning in it.
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- Frozen Chrysalis - 06/02/2010
- Very strong meaning and filled with deph, I love it.
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- KillingDawn - 05/31/2010
- i liked it, it was really good :]
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