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We caught ravens at sunset, together
with our wide nets, woven
from folly and hope
We bore them to the ground,
panting, laughing
and the ravens told our future
scratched runes upon the dirt
with their char-black beaks:
You will be queen
of a strange land, and wear
rings of brass and silver
and bells braided in your hair.
In a chariot of silver
you will lead your armies
and they will say,
white fire flashes from her eyes
and when she sings,
she calls the valkyries to come.
On the day of your death
you lovers will cut you
into a thousand pieces
and devour you
In this, you will live on through them
and never die.
The ravens turned to me
and said,
You will be imprisoned
within a rose of glass
within a tower, ten-thousand steps
above the ground
And you will sleep there
for fourscore years
until a man climbs the tower to find you
and place you in his button-hole
and go to propose to his beloved.
His bride will carry you in her bouquet
and in years to come
you will hang above their mantle
until their youngest child
knocks you from your perch
and the rose shall break
and you shall be free.
We let the ravens go
and they flew into the sky, a dark and seething whorl
against the bright sun.
We let the ravens go
and together ran on beyond the hills.
- by Rynn Calais |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/19/2009 |
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- Title: We Caught Ravens
- Artist: Rynn Calais
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Description:
Bad poetry
oh noetry! - Date: 12/19/2009
- Tags: caught ravens
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Comments (3 Comments)
- nbetweener - 02/23/2010
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Wow. Epic, and classic. Amazing...
But they bright sun....at sunset? Doesn't quite fit. "against the crimson sky" perhaps? - Report As Spam
- Brooklay - 12/26/2009
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Agreed !
Wonderful poem (:
5/5 - Report As Spam
- sporosofyadah - 12/20/2009
- Wow. You are truly talented.
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