- im luckier because i have a girl like u who considers herself lucky for having a guy like me which to most people should never be they might think its yucky but i do believe in love at first sight most people feel cursed and even weighed down but ill never frown because ill always have u around
- by Master Posiedon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/04/2009 |
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- Title: Love at first sight
- Artist: Master Posiedon
- Description: i wrote this in like less than a minute for my girl friend so if u dnt like it dnt be afraid to comment and maybe give me a few pionters cuz this only the second time i have entered something
- Date: 12/04/2009
- Tags: have wrote girlfriend love
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- Master Posiedon - 12/16/2009
- thnx and i know i need to work on it but i was talking to my gf and made it up for her in a like 45 secs but i never really thought about writing songs
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- peaceloveandhappinesssyd - 12/07/2009
- only thing to say is I LOVE THE POEM... great concept, but the only thing you need to work on is ryming, because truthfully this concept could become a song so alot of songs rhyme.. other than that 5 stars! wink
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